Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
When do you usually eat snacks now?
수험생
I usually eat snack in the afternoon after I eat lunch. When I eat lunch I feel like I want something to eat after, so I tend to eat it at that time. Maybe some bar of chocolates or fruits, even protein bar.
시험관
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
수험생
I wouldn't say it's healthy because having snacks increased more carefully intakes, but on the other hand it's also helps me not getting too hungry before dinner and indulge anything anything so it's OK to have it.
시험관
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
수험생
Yes, I often ate snack when I was young. The perfect time for eating that would be after school. I often shared my snack with my friends, it helped me be coming closer to them and also we are having happy moment.
시험관
What snacks do you like to eat?
수험생
I like everything that's made from chocolates and cocoa powder right now. Maybe I'm prone to choose more healthy alternative because eating too many snack made me fat like a fruit.
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총점
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
점수: 65.0제안: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้รูปประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ "snacks" แทน "snack" และปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล
예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after lunch because I often feel hungry. For example, I might have a chocolate bar, some fruits, or a protein bar to satisfy my hunger.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
점수: 50.0제안: คำตอบนี้ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนของความคิด รวมถึงการใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ "however" หรือ "but" เพื่อแสดงความขัดแย้ง
예시: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because it can increase my calorie intake. However, it helps me avoid feeling too hungry before dinner, so I think it's okay to have snacks sometimes.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
점수: 60.0제안: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ "snacks" แทน "snack" และปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติ รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคและอธิบายความรู้สึกหรือผลลัพธ์อย่างชัดเจน
예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially after school. I usually shared my snacks with my friends, which helped us become closer and enjoy happy moments together.
What snacks do you like to eat?
점수: 45.0제안: คำตอบนี้ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น ใช้คำว่า "snacks" แทน "snack" และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล
예시: I like snacks made from chocolate and cocoa powder. However, I try to choose healthier alternatives like fruits because eating too many snacks made me gain weight.
문법
× I usually eat snack in the afternoon after I eat lunch.
✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after I eat lunch.
The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to a general habit of eating more than one snack or snack items. In English, when talking about general habits or countable items in plural, the plural form is used.
× Maybe some bar of chocolates or fruits, even protein bar.
✓ Maybe some bars of chocolates or fruits, even protein bars.
The phrase 'some bar of chocolates' is incorrect because 'bar' is countable and should be plural 'bars' when referring to more than one. Similarly, 'protein bar' should be plural 'protein bars' to match the plural context.
× having snacks increased more carefully intakes, but on the other hand it's also helps me not getting too hungry before dinner and indulge anything anything so it's OK to have it.
✓ having snacks increases more careful intake, but on the other hand it also helps me not get too hungry before dinner and not indulge in anything, so it's OK to have it.
The verb forms and word choices are incorrect. 'Increased' should be 'increases' to agree with the subject. 'More carefully intakes' is incorrect; 'more careful intake' is better. 'Helps me not getting' should be 'helps me not get'. 'Indulge anything anything' is incorrect; it should be 'not indulge in anything'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.
× Yes, I often ate snack when I was young.
✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young.
The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple occasions or items. Using plural form is correct when talking about habitual actions involving countable items.
× it helped me be coming closer to them and also we are having happy moment.
✓ it helped me become closer to them and also we had happy moments.
The phrase 'be coming closer' is incorrect; the correct form is 'become closer'. Also, 'we are having happy moment' should be past tense 'we had happy moments' to match the past context and plural 'moments' for generality.
× I like everything that's made from chocolates and cocoa powder right now.
✓ I like everything that's made from chocolate and cocoa powder right now.
The word 'chocolates' is plural and usually refers to individual pieces, but here 'chocolate' as an uncountable noun is more appropriate when referring to the substance used in making things.
× Maybe I'm prone to choose more healthy alternative because eating too many snack made me fat like a fruit.
✓ Maybe I'm prone to choose healthier alternatives because eating too many snacks made me fat like a fruit.
'More healthy' should be 'healthier' as the comparative form of 'healthy'. 'Alternative' should be plural 'alternatives' to match 'more'. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple items.
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