Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Bạn nên chú ý đến việc chia động từ đúng thì và chọn từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'eating' nên là 'eat', 'snakes' nên là 'snacks'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp để tăng tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: I usually eat snacks at home after a busy day at work. For example, I often have fruits and biscuits because they help me relax and provide a quick energy boost during my free time.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện cách sử dụng từ vựng và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'nutrient snake' nên là 'nutritious snack', 'intimidates sugary' không đúng nghĩa và cần được thay thế bằng cụm từ phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: For me, it depends on the type of snack I eat. If I choose nutritious snacks like vegetables or fruits, they are beneficial because they contain vitamins and fiber. However, sugary snacks can be unhealthy and may cause problems like weight gain.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến việc chia động từ đúng thì và sử dụng số nhiều hoặc số ít phù hợp (ví dụ: 'eat' nên là 'ate', 'snack' nên là 'snacks'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often ate a lot of snacks when I was young, especially sugary and salty ones because they were convenient and tasted delicious. However, nowadays I try to avoid them to maintain a healthier diet.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì đúng trong câu (ví dụ: 'was hungry' nên là 'am hungry'). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: After lunch and dinner, I usually enjoy fruits and vegetables such as apples, bananas, or watermelon. Sometimes, I also eat salty chips when I am hungry during my free time.

× I usually eating fruits and biscuits because it set me relaxing and when.

✓ I usually eat fruits and biscuits because it helps me relax.

The verb 'eating' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. The correct form is the base verb 'eat' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'set me relaxing and when' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me relax' to express the effect properly.

× Snakes are important to me since they provide a little break and sound delicious energy during my free time.

✓ Snacks are important to me since they provide a little break and sound delicious energy during my free time.

The word 'Snakes' is a misspelling of 'Snacks'. This is a vocabulary error but also affects meaning. 'Snacks' is plural and correct here.

× If I choose a nutrient snake like vegetable or fruits, they are beneficial for my health because they are full of vitamins and fiber.

✓ If I choose a nutritious snack like vegetables or fruits, they are beneficial for my health because they are full of vitamins and fiber.

The adjective 'nutrient' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'nutritious' to describe food that provides nutrients. Also, 'snake' should be 'snack'. 'Vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' to match 'fruits'.

× However it intimidates sugary.

✓ However, it contains sugar.

The phrase 'it intimidates sugary' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that the snack contains sugar. 'Contains sugar' is the correct expression.

× Also the snack can be unhealthy and may cause problem like weight gain.

✓ Also, snacks can be unhealthy and may cause problems like weight gain.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to generalize the statement. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the plural context.

× Yes, I often eat a lot of snack when I was young, especially enjoyed sugary and salty snack because they were convenient and taste delicious.

✓ Yes, I often ate a lot of snacks when I was young, especially enjoyed sugary and salty snacks because they were convenient and tasted delicious.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was young'. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks'. 'Taste' should be past tense 'tasted'.

× However, nowadays I try to avoid them because I want to maintain a healthier diet.

✓ However, nowadays I try to avoid them because I want to maintain a healthier diet.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× After lunch and dinner, I usually enjoy fruits and vegetables such as apples, banana or watermelon.

✓ After lunch and dinner, I usually enjoy fruits and vegetables such as apples, bananas, or watermelon.

'Banana' should be plural 'bananas' to match the plural list of fruits.

× Sometimes I also eat salty chips when I was hungry in the free time.

✓ Sometimes I also eat salty chips when I am hungry in my free time.

The clause 'when I was hungry' should be present tense 'when I am hungry' to match the habitual action indicated by 'sometimes' and 'eat'. Also, 'in the free time' should be 'in my free time'.