Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi hiện tại, tránh nhầm lẫn giữa thì hiện tại và quá khứ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, but now I eat them less often because I am trying to maintain a healthy diet and lose weight.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai từ 'snacks'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy. When I was a child, I liked them a lot, but now I avoid them because I know they are bad for my health.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và tránh lặp từ. Hãy nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, but my family made sure I didn't eat too many to keep a balanced diet.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm từ 'snack' thay vì 'snake'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy mô tả chi tiết hơn về loại snack bạn thích và lý do.

예시: I like corn snacks the most because they are tasty and not too spicy. I avoid original or spicy snacks because they can hurt my mouth and upset my stomach.

× Yes, I usually eat snacks when I was a child, but now I'm 15 years old and I eat snacks less because I'm in my diet.

✓ Yes, I usually ate snacks when I was a child, but now I'm 15 years old and I eat snacks less because I'm on a diet.

The sentence mixes present tense 'usually eat' with past time 'when I was a child'. The correct past tense 'ate' should be used to match the past time reference. Also, the phrase 'I'm in my diet' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I'm on a diet'.

× I wanna lose my weight because I'm grown up and I have to keep my weight to be beautiful, pretty.

✓ I want to lose weight because I've grown up and I have to maintain my weight to be beautiful and pretty.

The phrase 'lose my weight' is unnatural; 'lose weight' is the correct expression. Also, 'keep my weight' is better expressed as 'maintain my weight'. The phrase 'I'm grown up' should be 'I've grown up' to indicate a completed action.

× Of course no. But when I was young, like 5 years old, I think every children in the world all like snakes.

✓ Of course not. But when I was young, like 5 years old, I think every child in the world likes snacks.

'Of course no' is incorrect; it should be 'Of course not'. 'Every children' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'every child' is correct. Also, 'like snakes' is a typo; it should be 'like snacks'.

× But now when we grow up and in a adult age, we don't like it much because we recognize it's not good for health.

✓ But now when we grow up and are adults, we don't like it much because we recognize it's not good for our health.

The phrase 'in a adult age' is incorrect; it should be 'are adults'. Also, 'good for health' should be 'good for our health' to specify whose health.

× Yes, and I think every child in the world likes eating snacks when they were young, but my family have a balanced situation to avoid eating too much snacks to the children in my house.

✓ Yes, and I think every child in the world likes eating snacks when they were young, but my family has a balanced approach to avoid children in my house eating too many snacks.

'My family have' is incorrect; 'family' is singular and should be 'has'. 'Balanced situation' is unnatural; 'balanced approach' is better. 'Too much snacks' is incorrect; 'too many snacks' is correct because 'snacks' is countable.

× So I don't often eat snacks when I was young, but I really liked eating.

✓ So I didn't often eat snacks when I was young, but I really liked eating them.

The phrase 'don't often eat' is present tense but refers to past time 'when I was young'; it should be 'didn't often eat'. Also, 'liked eating' should be followed by an object, so 'liked eating them' is correct.

× Oh I like corn snake.

✓ Oh, I like corn snacks.

'Corn snake' is a typo or incorrect; it should be 'corn snacks'.

× I don't like original or spicy snacks because umm they chilly and they hurt my mouth or hurt my stomach ache so I don't like them.

✓ I don't like original or spicy snacks because they are chilly and they hurt my mouth or cause stomach aches, so I don't like them.

'They chilly' is incorrect; it should be 'they are chilly'. 'Hurt my stomach ache' is incorrect; it should be 'cause stomach aches'.

× Uh the original snacks is too salt so I don't like them.

✓ Uh, the original snacks are too salty, so I don't like them.

'Is too salt' is incorrect; 'snacks' is plural so 'are' is needed and 'salt' should be the adjective 'salty'.

× I like corn snake most.

✓ I like corn snacks the most.

'Corn snake' is incorrect; it should be 'corn snacks'. Also, superlative form 'the most' is needed here.