Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
When do you usually eat snacks now?
수험생
I usually eat snacks in the afternoon around 3:00 or 4:00 PM. That's my tea time and I will prepare myself a pot of black tea to accompany the sweet snacks.
시험관
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
수험생
I admitted that it is harmful to my physical health since it has too much sugar and oil. However, I think my mental health improves after such a relaxing and refreshing tea time.
시험관
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
수험생
No, I seldom eat snacks in that my parents strictly prohibited me from eating high sugar snacks to protect my teeth.
시험관
What snacks do you like to eat?
수험생
I love the sweet snacks such as the chocolate with hazelnuts inside because I really enjoy the texture of the chocolate when it is melting in my mouth and the hazelnut will added the scents to the special flavor.
평가
총점
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答比较自然且内容完整，但可以稍微简化句子结构，避免重复表达，比如“tea time”和“prepare a pot of black tea”可以合并表达，使语言更简洁流畅。
예시: I usually have snacks around 3 or 4 PM during my tea time, when I prepare a pot of black tea to enjoy with some sweet treats.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: Although eating snacks with lots of sugar and oil can harm my physical health, I believe that having a relaxing tea time helps improve my mental well-being.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
점수: 75.0제안: 句子中时态使用不准确，应该用过去时描述过去的习惯，同时“in that”用法不太自然，建议用更常见的连接词。
예시: No, I seldom ate snacks when I was young because my parents strictly prohibited me from eating high-sugar snacks to protect my teeth.
What snacks do you like to eat?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“will added”应为“adds”，且句子较长，建议拆分并使用更准确的时态和词汇。
예시: I love sweet snacks like chocolate with hazelnuts because I enjoy the smooth texture of the melting chocolate and the nutty aroma that adds a special flavor.
문법
× I admitted that it is harmful to my physical health since it has too much sugar and oil.
✓ I admit that it is harmful to my physical health since it has too much sugar and oil.
这里使用了过去时态'admitted'，但句子表达的是现在的事实，应使用一般现在时'admit'。
× No, I seldom eat snacks in that my parents strictly prohibited me from eating high sugar snacks to protect my teeth.
✓ No, I seldom ate snacks because my parents strictly prohibited me from eating high sugar snacks to protect my teeth.
句子中描述的是过去的习惯和行为，应该使用过去时态'seldom ate'和'prohibited'，而不是现在时。
× the hazelnut will added the scents to the special flavor.
✓ the hazelnut will add the scents to the special flavor.
'will'后面应接动词原形，'added'是过去式，应该改为原形动词'add'。
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