Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I feel hungry or have free time because they help me feel better and happier.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体理由。

예시: Yes, I think eating snacks like chocolate in moderation is healthy because it gives me energy without making me overeat.

제안: 回答较好，但用词和时态有待改进，建议注意时态一致性，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. My parents bought me chocolates and biscuits, which I shared with my friends. We enjoyed eating together and felt happy.

제안: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达。

예시: I like eating chocolate and cookies because they make me feel happy and energetic, helping me to relax after a busy day.

× In addition, can help me make me feel happy.

✓ In addition, it can help me feel happy.

句子缺少主语，导致语法错误。应添加主语“it”来使句子完整。

× every time I eat snack I don't eat too much after then I eat snack such as chocolate which made me feel energetic and I don't eat their snacks doesn't help it.

✓ Every time I eat snacks, I don't eat too much. Then I eat snacks such as chocolate, which makes me feel energetic, and I don't eat other snacks that don't help.

“snack”应使用复数形式“snacks”，动词“made”应改为“makes”以匹配现在时，句子结构混乱需拆分并调整。

× my parents bought me lots of snacks such as chocolate, biscuit and then I will share the snacks with my colleagues.

✓ My parents bought me lots of snacks such as chocolate and biscuits, and then I would share the snacks with my friends.

“biscuit”应使用复数形式“biscuits”，且“colleagues”通常指同事，语境应为“friends”。

× every time when I add them I feel energetic and it can help me unwind.

✓ Every time when I eat them, I feel energetic and it can help me unwind.

“add”用法不当，应改为“eat”表示吃零食。