Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
When do you usually eat snacks now?
수험생
I usually prefer having nibbled around afternoon time because I do my lunch and other meals in time. So that way I feel a little bit hungry around afternoon. So I grab some thing healthy to fill my stomach and that way it also provides me with sufficient energy for me to wait till the dinner time which is usually around.
시험관
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
수험생
Yes, I feel like it's healthy for us to have nibbles if it is of right proportion and with and something that has a beneficial value. For instance, having something that is rich in protein or vitamins or minerals can be helpful and it is also essential for our gut and digestion, but I wouldn't.
시험관
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
수험생
Yes, as far as I remember as a child I was indulged in snacking. I preferred junk food all the time over something healthy. But over the years I have worked on my deleterious habits and eat more nutritious and concise food lately.
시험관
What snacks do you like to eat?
수험생
For the past one year I've actually been focusing on my diet because I wanted to reduce my weight for which I am having a balanced night which is full of protein and so I prefer having nuts and other forms of seed for snacks lately.
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총점
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence. For example, start with when you usually eat snacks, then explain why, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.
예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I have my meals on time and feel a bit hungry then. So, I choose healthy snacks to keep me energized until dinner.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete at the end. Make sure to finish your thoughts and avoid vague phrases. Use specific examples and linking words to explain your opinion clearly.
예시: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if they are in the right portion and contain beneficial nutrients like protein, vitamins, or minerals. These help with digestion and overall health.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using simpler and more natural vocabulary. Also, explain briefly how your habits changed using linking words for coherence.
예시: Yes, I used to snack a lot on junk food when I was a child. However, over the years, I have changed my habits and now prefer healthier and more nutritious snacks.
What snacks do you like to eat?
점수: 60.0제안: Try to organize your answer more clearly and avoid confusing phrases like 'balanced night'. Use linking words to explain your reasons and be specific about your snack choices.
예시: In the past year, I have focused on my diet to lose weight. Therefore, I prefer eating protein-rich snacks like nuts and seeds because they are healthy and satisfying.
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