Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且内容重复。建议简化表达，避免冗余，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel sleepy because they help me stay alert and focused.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词连接观点和原因，并丰富细节。

예시: I don't think snacks are very healthy because most of them are junk food; therefore, I try to limit how much I eat, although sometimes I crave them for a bit of excitement.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯，句子不完整。建议练习完整句子表达，使用连接词，并注意语法准确。

예시: No, I didn't eat many snacks when I was young because my mother put strict restrictions on me to avoid eating too much junk food.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并具体说明喜欢巧克力的原因。

예시: My favorite snack is chocolate because it gives me a warm feeling and boosts my energy. My mother allows me to eat it since she believes it is beneficial in moderation.

× No, I think snacks are most junk food, so actually I should control the amount of snacks that I eat.

✓ No, I think most snacks are junk food, so actually I should control the amount of snacks that I eat.

这里'snacks'是复数，'most junk food'前缺少限定词，应该是'most snacks are junk food'，表示大多数零食是垃圾食品。

× My mother told me not to eat too much snacks.

✓ My mother told me not to eat too many snacks.

'snacks'是可数名词复数，'too much'用于不可数名词，应该用'too many'来修饰复数可数名词。

× And she is really. Putting some restrictions on me so I really don't have.

✓ And she really put some restrictions on me, so I really didn't have.

句子结构混乱，'is really. Putting'不正确，应改为过去时态'put'，并将句子连贯起来。

× I really didn't have any chance to do too much snacks.

✓ I really didn't have any chance to eat too many snacks.

'do too much snacks'结构错误，应该用'eat'来表示吃零食，且'too much'应改为'too many'修饰复数可数名词。

× Chocolate gave me a sense of warmth and say gave me a lot of energy.

✓ Chocolate gave me a sense of warmth and also gave me a lot of energy.

句子中'say'用法错误，应为'also'表示递进关系。

× The mother allowed me to eat it.

✓ My mother allowed me to eat it.

'The mother'用法不当，应该用'My mother'表示特指自己的母亲。

× It is She thought it is helpful so I can eat.

✓ She thought it was helpful, so I could eat it.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，应使用过去时态'was'和'could'，并调整句子顺序使其通顺。