Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够完整，且最后一句话未说完，显得不自然。建议回答时注意句子完整性，避免句子中断，并且可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I watch movies or TV shows because it helps me relax and relieve stress. However, recently I have started to control how often I eat snacks to maintain a healthier lifestyle.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子有些冗长且结构不够清晰。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Actually, I don't think eating snacks is healthy. Therefore, I try to avoid them and prefer to eat fruits or vegetables when I want a snack.

제안: 回答较为完整且有逻辑，但“strict on about”表达不准确，建议使用正确的搭配，并且可以增加一些细节使内容更丰富。

예시: Actually, no. When I was a child, my parents were strict about my diet to keep it balanced. However, they sometimes allowed me to eat snacks while watching TV or during festivals, which made those moments special.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“rather like”应为“prefer”，“In particularly”应为“in particular”，且句子结构混乱。建议注意语法和句子结构，避免重复和错误。

예시: I prefer to eat potato chips, especially when I watch TV shows or hang out with friends. In particular, I remember enjoying snacks with my classmates when I was a student.

× For me, I really enjoy eating snacks especially when I am watching movies or TV shows which helps me relieve stress and feel relaxed more.

✓ For me, I really enjoy eating snacks especially when I am watching movies or TV shows which help me relieve stress and feel more relaxed.

这里的主语是复数movies or TV shows，谓语动词helps应改为help以保持主谓一致。

× But now I started to control the times I eat snacks because of.

✓ But now I have started to control the times I eat snacks because of health reasons.

句子不完整，缺少原因部分，且时态应为现在完成时以表达从过去开始持续到现在的动作。

× Actually, no, I don't think eating snacks is a healthy behavior, so I try to avoid eating them and sometimes if I want to it's nice I try to eat some fruits or vegetables instead of it.

✓ Actually, no, I don't think eating snacks is a healthy behavior, so I try to avoid eating them and sometimes if I want to, I try to eat some fruits or vegetables instead of snacks.

句子中代词使用不当，'instead of it'应指代复数名词snacks，故改为instead of snacks；另外句子结构混乱，需加逗号和调整语序。

× When I was a child, my parents were strict on about my diet to keep it balanced.

✓ When I was a child, my parents were strict about my diet to keep it balanced.

短语中介词使用错误，正确搭配是strict about，而不是strict on about。

× I rather like to eat potato chips, especially when watch TV shows or stay with friends together.

✓ I rather like to eat potato chips, especially when I watch TV shows or stay with friends together.

缺少主语I，导致句子不完整，应补充主语。

× In particularly, I still remember when I eat ate snacks with classmates when I was a student.

✓ In particular, I still remember when I ate snacks with classmates when I was a student.

时态错误，回忆过去的事情应使用过去时ate；另外，单词拼写错误，'particularly'应为'in particular'。