Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'every 24 hours' 대신 'once a day' 또는 'every day'를 사용하는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한 'sweet sour things' 대신 'sweet and sour snacks'라고 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고 중복을 피하세요.

예시: I usually eat snacks once a day because I love sweet and sour flavors.

제안: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 'good for my brain healthy' 대신 'good for my brain health' 또는 'beneficial for my brain'이라고 해야 합니다. 또한, 답변이 모순적이므로 명확한 의견 제시가 필요합니다.

예시: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy, but I enjoy them because they help me feel more energetic.

제안: 문장이 길고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'ate too much snacks'는 'ate too many snacks'로 수정해야 하며, 어머니의 말을 인용할 때도 더 자연스럽게 표현해야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I ate a lot of snacks when I was young, and my mom often told me not to eat too many because it could harm my teeth.

제안: 답변이 다소 모호하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'all of it' 대신 'all kinds of snacks'라고 하고, 맛과 질감에 대해 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다. 또한, 부정문은 'I don't dislike any snacks'로 표현하세요.

예시: I like all kinds of snacks, especially those that are sweet, sour, crunchy, or smooth. For example, I really enjoy marshmallows.

× Well I eat my snack every 24 hours because I love eating snacks like sweet sour things, so I usually eat my smack every day.

✓ Well I eat my snacks every 24 hours because I love eating snacks like sweet and sour things, so I usually eat my snack every day.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'sweet sour things' should be 'sweet and sour things' to correctly connect the adjectives. 'Smack' is a typo and should be 'snack'.

× Well, the answer is no. But for me, I think it's good for my brain healthy. So yeah, I really enjoy eating my snack.

✓ Well, the answer is no. But for me, I think it's good for my brain health. So yeah, I really enjoy eating my snack.

The phrase 'brain healthy' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'brain health'.

× Of course when I was young I ate too much snacks so my mom said always said please don't eat snack too much because you were your teeth gonna suck.

✓ Of course, when I was young I ate too many snacks so my mom always said, 'Please don't eat too many snacks because your teeth are going to get bad.'

'Too much snacks' should be 'too many snacks' because 'snacks' is countable. 'Eat snack too much' should be 'eat too many snacks'. The sentence structure and wording were corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Well, obviously all of it. I love sweet, sour or some crunchy or smooth. I like marshmallows. I don't have any dislike snacks.

✓ Well, obviously all of them. I love sweet, sour, crunchy, or smooth snacks. I like marshmallows. I don't have any snacks I dislike.

'All of it' should be 'all of them' when referring to multiple snacks. 'Some crunchy or smooth' should be 'crunchy or smooth snacks' for clarity. 'Dislike snacks' should be 'snacks I dislike' for correct word order.