Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不完整，且有语法错误。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免语无伦次，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks on weekends because I have more free time then. During weekdays, I am busy with work and rarely have time to snack.

제안: 表达含糊且语法错误较多，逻辑不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Most snacks are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat. However, eating a small amount occasionally can be good for our mood.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并提供具体细节。

예시: I did not often eat snacks when I was young because my mother was careful about my calorie intake. She believed snacks were bad for my health.

제안: 回答表达混乱，句子不完整，词汇使用不当。建议用清晰的句子表达喜欢的零食，并说明原因。

예시: I like many snacks, but if I have to choose, I prefer chips and cake. Although cake has a lot of sugar, it makes me feel happy when I am sad.

× I just eat and I feel a little hungry but on the weekends. Is there all the time and I will. Grab a.

✓ I just eat when I feel a little hungry, but on the weekends, I have more time and I will grab a snack.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。应将句子重新组织，使其表达清晰连贯。建议将断句合并，补充缺失部分。

× While most all snacks are inaccurate and is bad for our health, so.

✓ While most snacks are unhealthy and bad for our health,

“most all”用法不正确，应使用“most”表示大多数。且“inaccurate”用词错误，应为“unhealthy”表示不健康。

× While most all snacks are inaccurate and is bad for our health, so.

✓ While most snacks are unhealthy and bad for our health,

主语“most snacks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× But if we have a little. Doesn't not only doesn't hurt our house, but also make us in a good mood.

✓ But if we have a little, it not only doesn't hurt our health, but also makes us in a good mood.

句子连接不当，断句错误。应将句子合并，使用正确的连接词和结构。

× Doesn't not only doesn't hurt our house, but also make us in a good mood.

✓ It not only doesn't hurt our health, but also makes us in a good mood.

缺少主语“it”，且“house”应为“health”，代词使用错误。

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young? Student: I wish I could say yes but no. To be honest my mom would stay with my dad, especially her calories.

✓ I wish I could say yes, but no. To be honest, my mom would stay with my dad, especially about her calories.

句子中“stay with my dad”表达不清，可能想表达“watch her calories”。应改为“watch her calories”。

× To be honest my mom would stay with my dad, especially her calories.

✓ To be honest, my mom would watch her calories, especially with my dad.

“stay with my dad”用法不当，应为“watch her calories”。“especially”后应接介词短语“with my dad”。

× She saying it's bad for my body. And.

✓ She said it's bad for my body.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词时态错误，应使用过去时“said”。

× That is a tough question because I like a lot of snacks. If I just want and let's say chips or cake.

✓ That is a tough question because I like a lot of snacks. If I had to choose, let's say chips or cake.

句子结构不完整，“If I just want”不合适，应改为“if I had to choose”。

× A cake is a hair Curry but it makes me but it has sugar and makes me feel.

✓ Cake is a high-calorie food, but it has sugar and makes me feel happy.

“hair Curry”应为“high-calorie”，“makes me feel”后应补充情感状态。

× I'm happy when I feel down.

✓ I'm happy when I feel down.

句子语法正确，但语义矛盾。建议改为“Cake makes me happy when I feel down.”以表达完整意思。