Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应注意语法时态一致性，避免句子碎片，且回答应更连贯自然。例如，“After I finish studying or exercising”更符合时态要求。同时，避免使用不完整的句子如“I think it is the key.”，应完整表达观点。

예시: I usually eat snacks after I finish studying or exercising to recharge my energy. Also, I like to nibble on snacks while watching TV because it makes me feel happier and gives me a small dopamine boost.

제안: 回答内容较好，但可使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，如“because”或“so”。此外，注意主谓一致，如“snack I choose doesn't”。

예시: I think my snack choices are quite healthy because I usually choose fruits, nuts, or dark chocolate. Also, I always check the calorie count on the ingredients list so that the snacks I pick don't harm my health.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题，如“fell in love with sort of snacks”应更具体。句子结构应更简洁，避免冗长和重复。

예시: Yes, I used to eat a lot of snacks when I was young. Back then, I loved very sweet and fried snacks and couldn't stop eating them, which probably caused my teeth problems and made me overweight.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“craft something like 30 like potato chips”不明确。应使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达。

예시: Currently, I enjoy dark chocolate with a rich, intense flavor and protein-rich nuts. However, sometimes I can't resist tasty snacks like potato chips or dried meat.

× After I finished studying or exercising, I usually grab some snack to top up my energy.

✓ After I finish studying or exercising, I usually grab some snacks to top up my energy.

这里的时间状语是现在时态的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时。并且“snack”应使用复数形式“snacks”，因为表示不特定的零食。

× After I finished studying or exercising, I usually grab some snack to top up my energy.

✓ After I finish studying or exercising, I usually grab some snacks to top up my energy.

“snack”应使用复数形式“snacks”，因为表示不特定的零食。

× Plus I'll nibble on snacks while watching TV too. I think it is the key. Makes me feel happier.

✓ Plus, I'll nibble on snacks while watching TV too. I think it is the key; it makes me feel happier.

“Makes me feel happier.”缺少主语，应补充主语“it”，并用分号连接句子，使句子结构完整。

× I usually go for things like fruit, nuts, or dark chocolates which are good for our health.

✓ I usually go for things like fruit, nuts, or dark chocolate which are good for our health.

“dark chocolate”通常作为不可数名词使用，不用复数形式。

× the snack I choose don't really mess with my health.

✓ the snack I choose doesn't really mess with my health.

主语“the snack”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“doesn't”。

× Yeah, I fell in love with sort of snacks when I was a kid, but unlike now, by then I was really into super sweet snacks and fried snacks and just keeping it in them and couldn't stop.

✓ Yeah, I fell in love with all sorts of snacks when I was a kid, but unlike now, back then I was really into super sweet snacks and fried snacks and just kept eating them and couldn't stop.

“sort of snacks”应为“all sorts of snacks”表示各种各样的零食；“keeping it in them”表达不清，改为“kept eating them”更符合语境。

× Yeah, I fell in love with sort of snacks when I was a kid, but unlike now, by then I was really into super sweet snacks and fried snacks and just keeping it in them and couldn't stop.

✓ Yeah, I fell in love with all sorts of snacks when I was a kid, but unlike now, back then I was really into super sweet snacks and fried snacks and just kept eating them and couldn't stop.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，“keeping”应改为过去式“kept”。

× That's probably why my teeth were not out there healthy and I was overweight.

✓ That's probably why my teeth were not very healthy and I was overweight.

“not out there healthy”表达不自然，应改为“not very healthy”更符合英语习惯。

× Right now I'm really into dark chocolate with rich intense flavor and the nuts that are high in protein, but every now and then I'll craft something like 30 like potato chips or dried meat.

✓ Right now I'm really into dark chocolate with rich intense flavor and nuts that are high in protein, but every now and then I'll crave something like potato chips or dried meat.

“the nuts”前不需要定冠词“the”，且“craft”应为“crave”，表示渴望。

× Right now I'm really into dark chocolate with rich intense flavor and the nuts that are high in protein, but every now and then I'll craft something like 30 like potato chips or dried meat.

✓ Right now I'm really into dark chocolate with rich intense flavor and nuts that are high in protein, but every now and then I'll crave something like potato chips or dried meat.

“something like 30 like potato chips”表达不清，应去掉“30 like”，使句子通顺。