Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I feel very hungry, especially at night. Although I know it's not a good habit, I enjoy snacks because they taste delicious.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I don't think eating snacks, especially at night after dinner, is healthy. It can make me gain weight and also affect my sleep because I am not hungry then.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免重复和模糊表达。

예시: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young. My mother always told me not to eat too many snacks because it is bad for my health.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误和句子不完整，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，表达时要完整且连贯。

예시: I like to eat candies like chocolate because they are very sweet. Eating them makes me feel happier, especially when I have problems or troubles.

× I usually eat snacks while very hungry, especially in the night.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I am very hungry, especially at night.

这里'snacks'是复数，使用正确；但'while very hungry'表达不完整，应改为'when I am very hungry'，'in the night'应改为'at night'，这是固定搭配。

× I think eating snacks is not a good habit, but for me I very like eating snacks because it tastes very delicious and.

✓ I think eating snacks is not a good habit, but for me I like eating snacks very much because they taste very delicious.

'I very like'是不正确的表达，应为'I like ... very much'；'it tastes'指代复数'snacks'应改为'they taste'；句尾的'and'多余，应去掉。

× Actually I think it is not helpful for me to eat snacks especially in the night after dinner because eating too much snacks may make me more heavy and fat and also it may make me can't sleep well because I'm not hungry.

✓ Actually, I think it is not good for me to eat snacks especially at night after dinner because eating too many snacks may make me heavier and fatter, and also it may make me unable to sleep well because I'm not hungry.

'in the night'应为'at night'；'too much snacks'应为'too many snacks'，因为'snacks'是可数名词；'make me more heavy and fat'应改为'make me heavier and fatter'，形容词比较级；'make me can't sleep'语法错误，应改为'make me unable to sleep'。

× No, I didn't because one was a kid.

✓ No, I didn't because I was a kid.

'one was a kid'表达不正确，应为'I was a kid'，主语应明确。

× My mother always told me not to eat snacks too much because she thought eating too much snacks is a bad way to maintain my health. It may might.

✓ My mother always told me not to eat too many snacks because she thought eating too many snacks is bad for my health.

'eat snacks too much'应改为'eat too many snacks'；'a bad way to maintain my health'表达不自然，应改为'is bad for my health'；'It may might'无意义，应删除。

× I like to choose some candies like chocolate to eat because Candice is very sweet.

✓ I like to choose some candies like chocolate to eat because candy is very sweet.

'Candice'应为'candy'；'candies'是复数，'candy'作为不可数名词表示糖果；此处应统一使用单数形式。

× When I eat them I will be more happy especially when I meet some problems and trouble.

✓ When I eat them, I will be happier especially when I encounter some problems and troubles.

'more happy'应改为'happier'，使用比较级；'meet some problems and trouble'表达不自然，应改为'encounter some problems and troubles'；'trouble'应为复数'troubles'。

× Although I think.

✓ Although I think so.

句子不完整，缺少宾语或补语，需补充完整。