Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“I'm control”应为“I control”，“sugar supplement”应为“sugar intake”。建议注意动词时态和搭配，避免重复表达“some snacks”，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I rarely eat snacks because I am trying to stay fit and control my sugar intake. However, sometimes when I watch movies or feel bored, I enjoy having some snacks and sharing them with my friends.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Definitely not. Snacks often contain too much oil and sugar, which are harmful to our health. Many experts advise us to avoid eating too many snacks.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“are doctors”应为“were doctors”，且最后一句“so I don't have the clothes”不符合语境，可能是表达错误。建议注意时态一致性和句子逻辑。

예시: No, I rarely ate snacks when I was young. My grandmother and mother were doctors, and they always warned me not to eat too many snacks. They never gave me money to buy them, so I didn't have the chance to eat them often.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，“lean on”用法不当，应使用“fond of”或“like”。句子结构有误，如“are also encourage”应为“also encourage”。建议使用正确的短语和语法。

예시: I really like a kind of Chinese snack, which is similar to popcorn but contains no sugar or oil, so it's very healthy. My mother and grandmother also encourage me to eat it.

× Well, I seldom eat some snacks because I'm keeping fit and I'm control the sugar supplement.

✓ Well, I seldom eat snacks because I'm keeping fit and I'm controlling the sugar intake.

这里的动词时态使用不当。'I'm control' 应该用现在进行时 'I'm controlling'，表示正在进行的动作。同时，'some snacks' 在否定句中通常不使用 'some'，应直接用复数名词 'snacks'。

× Well, I seldom eat some snacks because I'm keeping fit and I'm control the sugar supplement.

✓ Well, I seldom eat snacks because I'm keeping fit and I'm controlling the sugar intake.

在否定或频率副词修饰的句子中，'some' 通常不与可数复数名词连用，应直接使用复数形式。

× I'm control the sugar supplement.

✓ I'm controlling the sugar intake.

动词 'control' 在进行时态中应加 '-ing' 变为 'controlling'。

× But sometimes when I enjoy the movies or I just feel so boring, I will eat some snacks and share it with my friends.

✓ But sometimes when I enjoy movies or I just feel bored, I will eat some snacks and share them with my friends.

'the movies' 应为复数 'movies'，且 'feel so boring' 应改为 'feel bored'，因为这里是感受状态。'share it' 中 'it' 指代复数 'snacks'，应改为 'them'。

× I will eat some snacks and share it with my friends.

✓ I will eat some snacks and share them with my friends.

'snacks' 是复数，指代代词应使用复数形式 'them'。

× Definitely not snacks always contain too much oils or sugars, which are which is harmful to our body and many scientists and experts also told us also warned ads not eat too much snacks and we should eat our.

✓ Definitely not. Snacks always contain too much oil or sugar, which is harmful to our body. Many scientists and experts have also warned us not to eat too many snacks, and we should eat properly.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误。'oils or sugars' 应为不可数名词 'oil or sugar'。'which are which is' 语法错误，应为单数 'which is'。'warned ads' 应为 'warned us'。'eat our' 不完整，应补充完整表达。

× No, I seldom eat some snacks.

✓ No, I seldom ate snacks.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时 'ate'。

× When I was young, my grandmother and my mother are doctors and they always warn me not to eat too much snacks and they never gave me money to buy them, so I don't have the clothes.

✓ When I was young, my grandmother and my mother were doctors and they always warned me not to eat too many snacks and they never gave me money to buy them, so I didn't have the clothes.

时间状语为过去时，谓语动词应使用过去时。'are' 应改为 'were'，'warn' 改为 'warned'。'too much snacks' 应为 'too many snacks'，因为 'snacks' 是可数名词。

× When I was young, my grandmother and my mother are doctors and they always warn me not to eat too much snacks and they never gave me money to buy them, so I don't have the clothes.

✓ When I was young, my grandmother and my mother were doctors and they always warned me not to eat too many snacks and they never gave me money to buy them, so I didn't have the clothes.

'too much' 用于不可数名词，'snacks' 是可数名词，应使用 'too many'。

× so I don't have the clothes.

✓ so I didn't have the clothes.

句子时态应与上下文一致，且 'clothes' 可能是误用，应根据语境确认。

× I'm really lean on a kind of Chinese pop, not popcorn, because this kind of popcorn contains no sugar or oil and it's very healthy.

✓ I really like a kind of Chinese puffed snack, not popcorn, because this kind of snack contains no sugar or oil and it's very healthy.

'lean on' 用法错误，应为 'like'。'pop' 可能是误写，应为 'puffed snack' 或类似表达。

× My mother and grandmother are also encourage me to eat them.

✓ My mother and grandmother also encourage me to eat them.

主语为复数，谓语动词应为原形 'encourage'，去掉 'are'。