Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中出现了语义错误，将“steaks”（牛排）误用为“snacks”（零食），且表达不够自然，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁明了地回答问题，并避免语法错误。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 or 4 pm, to keep my energy up between meals.

제안: 回答中表达不清，“snacks are usually free”不符合逻辑，且语法错误较多。建议用更准确的表达说明零食不健康的原因，并注意语法和句子连贯性。

예시: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because they often contain many additives and high levels of sugar or fat.

제안: 回答较好，内容具体且有细节，表达了时间、原因和感受。但时态使用不够准确，应该用过去时。建议注意时态一致性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks like chips and candies because they were delicious and made me feel happy. I usually had them after school as a special treat, and sometimes I shared them with my friends, which made the experience even more enjoyable.

제안: 回答中出现了词汇错误，“communist”显然用错了词，且表达不够准确。建议使用恰当的词汇描述零食的特点，并注意句子逻辑和语法。

예시: I like eating snacks that are tasty and affordable, such as chips and cookies. They are convenient and satisfy my hunger between meals. For example, I often eat fruit-flavored candies when I study.

× I usually eat steaks twice a week because I think they are so delicious, but most of them are unhealthy and affect my health negatively so I should counter to eat them.

✓ I usually eat steak twice a week because I think it is so delicious, but most of it is unhealthy and affects my health negatively so I should cut down on eating it.

这里'steaks'应改为单数'steak'，因为通常说吃牛排时用不可数名词；'most of them'指代不明确，应改为'most of it'指代牛排；动词也需与单数主语一致，'affect'改为'affects'。此外，'counter to eat them'表达不正确，应改为'cut down on eating it'表示减少食用。

× Well I think it's unhealthy because snacks are usually free and it's many additives so they are unhealthy.

✓ Well I think it's unhealthy because snacks are usually fried and have many additives, so they are unhealthy.

原句中'free'应为'fried'（油炸的），'it's many additives'语法错误，应改为'have many additives'，表示含有许多添加剂。

× Yes, when I was young, I often eat snacks like chips and candies because they were delicious and made me feel happy.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks like chips and candies because they were delicious and made me feel happy.

描述过去习惯时应使用过去时态，'eat'应改为'ate'。

× I like eating snacks that are tasty and affordable, such as chips and cookies. I enjoy them because they are communist and satisfy my hunger between meals.

✓ I like eating snacks that are tasty and affordable, such as chips and cookies. I enjoy them because they are convenient and satisfy my hunger between meals.

'communist'用词错误，应为'convenient'（方便的），表示零食方便食用。

× For example, I often eat fruits flavor candies when I study.

✓ For example, I often eat fruit-flavored candies when I study.

'fruits flavor'应改为'fruit-flavored'，形容词短语修饰糖果，表示水果味的糖果。