Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重複且語句不夠流暢。建議你可以簡潔明確地表達，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。例如，可以說明你吃零食的具體時間和原因。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I watch animations or live streams because it helps me relax in a calm environment.

제안: 你的回答語法和用詞有些錯誤，且句子結構不完整。建議你用更正確的語法和連接詞來表達你的想法，並具體說明你如何改變習慣。

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy, although I enjoy them. Therefore, I have started to reduce my snack intake to improve my health.

제안: 回答中有重複和語法錯誤。建議你用更自然的語言描述過去的習慣，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I used to eat snacks a lot when I was a child because I found family meals boring and repetitive.

제안: 你的回答有語法錯誤和重複，且表達不夠清晰。建議你用簡潔的句子說明你喜歡的零食及原因，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

예시: My favorite snack is instant noodles because I can eat them anytime as long as I have hot water.

× I like to eat snacks when I am watching animations or some live lives, which is not not some nervous environment for me.

✓ I like to eat snacks when I am watching animations or some live streams, which is not a nervous environment for me.

The phrase 'live lives' is incorrect; the correct term is 'live streams'. Also, 'not not some nervous environment' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'not a nervous environment'. The adjective 'nervous' describes the environment, so the article 'a' is needed before it.

× I I can I can relax myself by it.

✓ I can relax myself by it.

The repetition 'I I can I can' is a speech disfluency and should be removed for clarity. Also, 'relax myself by it' is acceptable but could be improved to 'relax by it' for naturalness, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, removing repetition suffices.

× I don't think it is healthy for me to eat snack even if I always like to eat them.

✓ I don't think it is healthy for me to eat snacks even if I always like to eat them.

The word 'snack' is singular but should be plural 'snacks' to match the plural pronoun 'them' and the general meaning of eating snacks.

× But I start to change the habit which is not benefit for me.

✓ But I have started to change the habit which is not beneficial for me.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have started' to indicate a recent change. Also, 'not benefit' is incorrect; the adjective form 'not beneficial' should be used to describe the habit.

× I I get used to it less snacks in my normal life.

✓ I am getting used to eating fewer snacks in my normal life.

The phrase 'get used to it less snacks' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'getting used to eating fewer snacks'. 'Fewer' is used with countable nouns like 'snacks'. Also, the verb tense is adjusted to present continuous to indicate an ongoing process.

× Yes, when I was a kid I I like to eat snacks very much.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I liked to eat snacks very much.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' instead of present tense 'like'.

× I don't like to eat the eat the family food.

✓ I didn't like to eat the family food.

Since the sentence refers to past time ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be in past tense 'didn't like'. Also, the repeated phrase 'eat the' is an error and should be removed.

× It is very boring for me to eat the same food all the time.

✓ It was very boring for me to eat the same food all the time.

The sentence refers to past time, so the verb 'is' should be changed to past tense 'was'.

× My favorite snacks is instant noodles.

✓ My favorite snack is instant noodles.

The subject 'snacks' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing subject-verb disagreement. Also, 'favorite snack' is singular to match 'is'. 'Instant noodles' is plural but treated as a singular dish here.

× I like to eat them because I can choose the time whenever the time is I I I can eat them as long as I have the hot water.

✓ I like to eat them because I can choose the time; whenever it is, I can eat them as long as I have hot water.

The phrase 'the time is I I I can eat them' is repetitive and unclear. It should be 'whenever it is, I can eat them'. Also, 'the hot water' should be 'hot water' without the definite article because it refers to water in general.