Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I feel nervous because they help me relax.

제안: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确表达观点，并解释原因。

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because it might make me skip proper meals, which is bad for my health.

제안: 回答中时态使用错误，表达不连贯。建议使用过去时描述过去的习惯，并且逻辑清晰地说明结果。

예시: Yes, when I was young, I often ate a lot of snacks, so I ate less dinner. As a result, I am now quite fit and can easily wear shorts.

제안: 回答重复且缺乏具体内容。建议列举具体的零食种类，避免重复，并使用连词使句子流畅。

예시: I like to eat sweet snacks like chocolate and candies, as well as seafood snacks such as dried squid.

× I think it maybe make me feel relaxed.

✓ I think it may make me feel relaxed.

这里'maybe'是副词，表示'也许'，但句中需要使用情态动词'may'来表达可能性。应使用'may'而不是'maybe'。

× No I don't because when I is next maybe I will not choose formal dinner.

✓ No, I don't because when I am next, maybe I will not choose a formal dinner.

主语'I'后面动词应使用第一人称单数形式'am'，而不是'is'。此外，'formal dinner'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× Yes, when I'm young I often eat more snacks so that I eat less dinners.

✓ Yes, when I was young I often ate more snacks so that I ate less dinner.

描述过去的习惯动作，时态应使用过去时。'I'm young'应改为'was young'，'eat'改为'ate'。此外，'dinners'通常用不可数名词'dinner'表示一顿饭。

× Therefore, I'm fed now.

✓ Therefore, I'm fat now.

'fed'是'feed'的过去分词，意为'被喂养的'，此处应表达'我现在胖了'，应使用形容词'fat'。

× In short, I fit in shorts now.

✓ In short, I fit into shorts now.

动词'fit'后应接介词'into'表示'穿得下'，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I like to eat the sweet snacks, snacks and some snacks and some seafood snacks.

✓ I like to eat sweet snacks and some seafood snacks.

句中重复使用'snacks'显得冗余，应简化表达。同时，'the sweet snacks'中定冠词'the'不必要，且句子结构混乱，应调整。