Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式使用不当（例如“eating”应为“eat”）。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用，同时回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

예시: I rarely eat snacks, but when I drink alcohol with friends, I usually feel like having something to eat. Interestingly, I don't think it causes me to gain weight at that time.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“had bad effective”应为“have a bad effect”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，表达更连贯。

예시: Not at all. Snacks usually contain a lot of sugar and oil, which have a bad effect on health and body shape. Also, I don't like strong flavors, so I rarely buy snacks in my daily life.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“love eat something Sweetie”应为“love to eat sweet things”，且时态不一致。建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because children love to eat sweet things. My grandmother loved me very much, so she bought me lots of snacks every day. When I came back from school, I was excited to see different types of snacks on the table.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（如“snakes”应为“snacks”），语法错误和句子不完整。建议注意拼写，使用完整句子，并且表达更自然流畅。

예시: If I had to choose snacks, I would prefer those made from vegetables and fruits because they contain less oil and sugar. They are really good for keeping energy levels up, especially during rehearsals. Maintaining a balanced diet is very important.

× To be honest I rarely eating snacks but when I drinking alcohol with friends I always feel like having something to eat.

✓ To be honest, I rarely eat snacks but when I drink alcohol with friends I always feel like having something to eat.

动词后面不应该直接跟动名词形式，除非是特定结构。这里的主语是'I'，谓语动词应使用一般现在时的动词原形。

× But I find if I eating snacks at this time it seems not to make me gain weight.

✓ But I find if I eat snacks at this time it seems not to make me gain weight.

在条件句中，动词应使用一般现在时，不能用动名词形式。

× snacks usually contain lots of sugar and oils which both which had bad effective on both health and body shape.

✓ snacks usually contain lots of sugar and oils which both have bad effects on both health and body shape.

动词时态应与主语一致，且动词形式应正确。这里'snacks'是复数，谓语动词应用复数形式'have'。

× which both which had bad effective on both health and body shape.

✓ which both have bad effects on both health and body shape.

'effective'是形容词，需用名词形式'effect'的复数'effects'来表示影响。

× Plus I'm not a man, love strong flavour styles so I have no interest to buy some snacks in my daily life.

✓ Plus I'm not a man who loves strong flavour styles so I have no interest in buying snacks in my daily life.

缺少关系代词'who'连接定语从句，且动词应与主语一致。

× Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because we all know that children love eat something Sweetie and my grandmothers love me very much, so she bought me lots of snacks every day.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child because we all know that children love to eat something sweet and my grandmother loved me very much, so she bought me lots of snacks every day.

'love eat'应为' love to eat'，'Sweetie'应为形容词'sweet'，'grandmothers'应为单数'grandmother'，且过去时态动词应保持一致。

× children love eat something Sweetie

✓ children love to eat something sweet

'Sweetie'是名词，需用形容词'sweet'来修饰'something'。

× my grandmothers love me very much, so she bought me lots of snacks every day.

✓ my grandmother loved me very much, so she bought me lots of snacks every day.

主语和代词应保持一致，'grandmothers'复数与'she'单数不匹配。

× That makes me excited.

✓ That made me excited.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时。

× If I had to choose some snakes to have, I would say I prefer choose some made from vegetables and fruits which contain less oil and sugars than others.

✓ If I had to choose some snacks to have, I would say I prefer to choose some made from vegetables and fruits which contain less oil and sugar than others.

'snakes'应为'snacks'，'prefer choose'应为'prefer to choose'，'sugars'一般用不可数名词'sugar'。

× which contain less oil and sugars than others.

✓ which contain less oil and sugar than others.

'oil'和'sugar'作为不可数名词，使用'less'修饰，且不加复数。

× Is really good for rehearsals and help us feel energetic.

✓ It is really good for rehearsals and helps us feel energetic.

句子缺少主语，应加上'It'，且谓语动词应与主语一致。

× It's very important for us to maintaining a balanced diet.

✓ It's very important for us to maintain a balanced diet.

动词不定式中动词应为原形，不能用动名词形式。