Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh dư thừa. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually eat snacks only when I'm with friends who are snacking. Otherwise, I don't often buy snacks for myself.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói 'it's really depends', nên nói 'it really depends'. Đồng thời, hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

예시: I think it really depends on the type of snack. For example, fruits and yogurt are healthy, but oily snacks like chips are unhealthy.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because children usually enjoy different flavors like salty and sweet, which satisfy our taste buds.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý viết hoa tên các loại trái cây và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

예시: Currently, I prefer healthy snacks such as fruits. I especially love strawberries, peaches, and passion fruits because I enjoy their sweet and slightly sour taste.

× Like if we eat fruits or yogurt it also counts as a healthy snacks.

✓ Like if we eat fruits or yogurt it also counts as a healthy snack.

The word 'snacks' should be singular 'snack' because it refers to the general category in this context, matching the singular verb 'counts'.

× Well definitely, I think we all eat snacks when we're young.

✓ Well definitely, I think we all ate snacks when we were young.

The verb tense should be past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame 'when we were young'.

× Like other flavor of it, the salty of the salty, the sweetest flavor.

✓ Like other flavors of it, the salty flavor, the sweetest flavor.

The noun 'flavor' should be plural 'flavors' to match 'other', and the phrase 'the salty of the salty' is incorrect; it should be 'the salty flavor'.

× Like other flavor of it, the salty of the salty, the sweetest flavor.

✓ Like other flavors of it, the salty flavor, the sweetest flavor.

Same as above: 'flavor' should be plural 'flavors' and 'the salty of the salty' is incorrect; it should be 'the salty flavor'.

× I think it's really depends on the snack.

✓ I think it really depends on the snack.

The phrase 'it's really depends' is incorrect; 'depends' should be used with 'it' without 'is'.

× But if we eat like chips and stuff like that with a lot of oil, I think it's really unhealthy.

✓ But if we eat chips and stuff like that with a lot of oil, I think it's really unhealthy.

The word 'like' before 'chips' is unnecessary and incorrect here; it should be removed.

× Well for now I really care about my health so I would prefer healthy snacks like fruits and especially I love strawberry, Peach or like passion fruits I like the sweetest but at the same time sourness of those fruits.

✓ Well for now I really care about my health so I would prefer healthy snacks like fruits and especially I love strawberries, peaches or passion fruits. I like the sweetness but at the same time the sourness of those fruits.

The fruit names should be plural ('strawberries', 'peaches') to match the context. 'Sweetest' should be 'sweetness' as a noun, and 'sourness' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.