Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid unclear phrases like "I would write a." Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: I usually eat snacks when I feel hungry between meals or when there is no proper food available at home.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and salt, such as chips.

제안: Focus on using past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, improve sentence structure and clarity by breaking long sentences into shorter ones and using linking words.

예시: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young because my parents were quite strict about buying sweets. They said snacks were unhealthy, so I rarely tasted them as a child.

제안: Complete your sentences fully and avoid leaving thoughts unfinished. Use specific examples and try to expand your answer with reasons or preferences.

예시: I like eating chocolate, especially Kit Kat, and chips because they taste delicious and are easy to find.

× Where I am hungry or I'm I can't find food in my house, I would write a.

✓ When I am hungry or I can't find food in my house, I would write a.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an unclear phrase 'I'm I'. The corrected sentence uses 'When' to introduce the condition properly and removes the unclear phrase, making the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I don't think it is healthy for eating snacks because snacks is containing lots of sugar and salt, probably like in chips.

✓ I don't think it is healthy to eat snacks because snacks contain lots of sugar and salt, probably like chips.

The phrase 'healthy for eating snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'healthy to eat snacks'. Also, 'snacks is containing' is wrong because 'snacks' is plural and 'contain' is the correct verb form. The phrase 'like in chips' is better as 'like chips' for clarity.

× No I don't, my parents are pretty strict from buying snacks or sweets to me and she said it is pretty unhealthy for me so I never taste snacks when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't. My parents were pretty strict about buying snacks or sweets for me, and they said it was pretty unhealthy for me, so I never tasted snacks when I was a child.

The response refers to the past, so past tense should be used ('didn't', 'were', 'said', 'was', 'tasted'). Also, 'strict from buying' is incorrect; it should be 'strict about buying'. 'She' should be 'they' to agree with 'parents'.

× I like chocolate and chips. Chocolate is probably for Kit Kat and chips is.

✓ I like chocolate and chips. The chocolate is probably Kit Kat, and the chips are...

'Chocolate' and 'chips' are treated as singular and plural respectively. 'Chocolate is probably for Kit Kat' is unclear; it should be 'The chocolate is probably Kit Kat'. Also, 'chips is' is incorrect; it should be 'chips are'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.