Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“more watery”用词不当。建议用更准确的词汇描述零食的特点，并避免重复表达。

예시: I usually eat snacks on weekends because I'm busy during weekdays. My favorite snack is chips because they are affordable, slightly spicy, and very tasty.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“is don't healthy”，表达不够准确。建议用更自然的句式表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: No, I don't think snacks are healthy because eating too much candy can cause weight gain and damage your teeth.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如时态错误和用词不当（“most watering”）。建议注意时态一致性，使用恰当的形容词，并简洁表达。

예시: Yes, I often ate sweet snacks when I was young because they were very delicious. However, my mom told me not to eat too many because they are unhealthy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词错误，如“most watering”和“It's too healthy for us”表达不当。建议用准确的词汇描述零食特点，并避免矛盾表达。

예시: I like to eat snacks like chips because they are a little spicy and tasty. I don't like candy because it's too sweet and not very healthy.

× And my favorite snack is chips.

✓ And my favorite snack is chips.

此句中“chips”作为复数名词使用，前面用单数“snack”指代整体零食类别，语法上无误，无需修改。

× It's little bit cheap, it's a little bit spicy and more watery.

✓ It's a little bit cheap, a little bit spicy, and a bit watery.

“little bit”前缺少冠词“a”，应为“a little bit”。“more watery”比较级用法不当，应改为“a bit watery”表示程度。

× No, I think the snacks is don't healthy for everybody because you know candy can make you be fat and it can make your teeth broken.

✓ No, I think snacks aren't healthy for everybody because, you know, candy can make you fat and it can damage your teeth.

“snacks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“aren't”。“is don't healthy”结构错误，应改为“aren't healthy”。“make you be fat”表达不自然，改为“make you fat”。“make your teeth broken”应改为“damage your teeth”。

× So I think the snacks isn't healthy.

✓ So I think snacks aren't healthy.

“snacks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“aren't”，而非单数“isn't”。

× Yes I often eat sweet snacks when I was young because sweet snacks is most watering and I think it's very delicious but my mom told me don't eat two more because it is not healthy for us.

✓ Yes, I often ate sweet snacks when I was young because sweet snacks were the most refreshing and I think they were very delicious, but my mom told me not to eat too many because it was not healthy for us.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时态“ate”。“sweet snacks is”应改为复数过去时“were”。“most watering”表达不当，应为“the most refreshing”。“don't eat two more”应改为“not to eat too many”。

× I like to eat several snacks such as chips.

✓ I like to eat several snacks such as chips.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× The chip is little bit spicy and most watering.

✓ The chips are a little bit spicy and very refreshing.

“chip”应为复数“chips”，谓语动词用复数“are”。“little bit”前需加冠词“a”。“most watering”表达不当，应改为“very refreshing”。

× I very like it but the candy is too sweet so I don't like to eat candy.

✓ I like it very much, but candy is too sweet, so I don't like to eat candy.

“I very like it”表达不自然，应改为“I like it very much”。“the candy”前冠词可省略，且保持一致。

× It's too healthy for us.

✓ It's not healthy for us.

“too healthy”表达与语境不符，应为“not healthy”表示“不健康”。