Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“doing with my homework”应改为“doing my homework”。此外，回答应更自然流畅，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: I usually eat snacks while watching funny videos or doing my homework. Although I know it's not very healthy, I just can't stop eating them.

제안: 回答中应注意语法和表达准确，如“They are with high sugar and oil”应改为“they contain high amounts of sugar and oil”。同时，句子应更连贯，避免断裂。

예시: Most snacks, like chips, are not very healthy because they contain high amounts of sugar and oil. However, they taste good, so I still enjoy eating them.

제안: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅，如使用“because”解释原因。

예시: Not really, because my parents didn't allow me to eat too many snacks since they said snacks are really unhealthy.

제안: 回答中“lettuce”作为零食不太合适，应选择更常见的零食名称。句子结构重复，应简化并使用连接词提高流畅度。

예시: I like spicy snacks such as spicy chips and nuts because I enjoy the exciting and strong flavors.

× I usually eat snacks when I'm watching some funny videos or doing with my homework.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm watching some funny videos or doing my homework.

动词短语中不需要介词“with”，应直接使用动词+宾语结构。这里“doing with my homework”是不正确的表达，正确的是“doing my homework”。

× Although I've no snacks.

✓ Although I have no snacks.

“I've no snacks”是口语缩写形式，但在书面语中应使用完整形式“I have no snacks”。此外，句子结构不完整，应与前句合并或补充完整。

× They are with high sugar and oil, but it tastes good and that I still like eating them.

✓ They are high in sugar and oil, but they taste good and I still like eating them.

“are with high sugar and oil”表达不正确，正确用法是“are high in sugar and oil”。此外，主语和谓语应保持一致，“it tastes good”应改为“they taste good”，因为主语是复数“snacks”。

× My parents didn't allow me to eat too much snacks.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to eat too many snacks.

“too much”用于不可数名词，“snacks”是可数名词复数，应该用“too many”。

× My parents didn't allow me to eat too much snacks.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to eat too many snacks.

“snacks”是可数名词复数，量词应使用“many”而非“much”。

× They said snacks are really unhealthy.

✓ They said snacks were really unhealthy.

间接引语中时态应与主句保持一致，过去时态中“are”应改为“were”。

× I like to eat spicy snacks like lettuce and spicy chips, and I really like to eat spicy things and I think it's a little bit exciting.

✓ I like to eat spicy snacks like lettuce and spicy chips, and I really like to eat spicy things because I think they're a little bit exciting.

句子连接不够自然，缺少连词“because”使句意更连贯。此外，“it's”应指代复数“things”，应改为“they're”。