Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复，比如用"I don't usually eat snacks these days, but I sometimes have some while watching TV."

예시: I don't usually eat snacks these days, but I sometimes have some while watching TV.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法，如"I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain unhealthy ingredients. Therefore, I advise people to limit their snack intake to stay healthy."

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain unhealthy ingredients. Therefore, I advise people to limit their snack intake to stay healthy.

제안: 回答中时态使用错误，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确时态并简洁表达，如"Yes, I did. When I was in elementary school, I used to eat chips once a week. My mom always told me not to eat too much, but I still did."

예시: Yes, I did. When I was in elementary school, I used to eat chips once a week. My mom always told me not to eat too much, but I still did.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，如"I prefer chips because they come in many flavors. I usually choose the original salted flavor because I think it's healthier and tastes good."

예시: I prefer chips because they come in many flavors. I usually choose the original salted flavor because I think it's healthier and tastes good.

× To be honest with you, recently I didn't eat any snacks, but sometimes I would eat snacks when I watch TV.

✓ To be honest with you, recently I haven't eaten any snacks, but sometimes I eat snacks when I watch TV.

这里的时间状语'recently'表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成时'haven't eaten'，而不是一般过去时'didn't eat'。另外，'when I watch TV'是现在时，表示习惯动作，'sometimes I eat snacks'也应使用一般现在时。

× Certainly it's not healthy because there are so many unhealthy ingredients in in the snacks.

✓ Certainly it's not healthy because there are so many unhealthy ingredients in the snacks.

句中'in in'重复，应该去掉一个'in'。

× So I recommend people not to eat so many snacks when they want to be health.

✓ So I recommend people not to eat so many snacks when they want to be healthy.

'health'是名词，句中需要形容词'h ealthy'来修饰人，表示健康的状态。

× I remember when I was in elementary school, I need to eat one chips per week and my mom always told me not to eat too much and, and I just, I just eat.

✓ I remember when I was in elementary school, I needed to eat one chip per week and my mom always told me not to eat too much, and I just ate.

回忆过去的事情，动词应使用过去时，'need'改为'needed'，'eat'改为'ate'。另外，'one chips'中'chips'应为单数'chip'。

× I remember when I was in elementary school, I need to eat one chips per week and my mom always told me not to eat too much and, and I just, I just eat.

✓ I remember when I was in elementary school, I needed to eat one chip per week and my mom always told me not to eat too much, and I just ate.

'chips'是复数，前面有数量词'one'，应使用单数形式'chip'。

× I prefer chips because there are so many flavour of chips and I always eat salt original flavor because it's healthier and it's good to eat.

✓ I prefer chips because there are so many flavors of chips and I always eat salt original flavor because it's healthier and it's good to eat.

'flavour'应使用复数形式'flavors'，因为前面有'many'修饰。