Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议回答时直接回应问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免语法错误。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel a little hungry between meals.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清楚表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I think eating snacks like fruits and vegetables is healthy because they provide essential vitamins and nutrients.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子说明原因，注意语法和词序。

예시: No, I did not often eat snacks when I was young because my parents limited my snack intake.

제안: 回答内容混乱，词汇使用错误，难以理解。建议明确表达喜欢的零食种类，并说明原因，使用恰当词汇。

예시: I like to eat traditional Chinese snacks such as rice cakes because they are tasty and contain a good amount of protein.

× No, because I think in a thing that this is not a delicious too too compared to this neck. In my childhood.

✓ No, because I think this is not very delicious compared to that snack I had in my childhood.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。需要调整词序和用词，使句子通顺且符合语法规则。

× Yes, because I always choosing some snakes involved are vegetables or fruit.

✓ Yes, because I always choose some snacks that include vegetables or fruit.

动词后不应直接接动名词形式，应该用动词原形。

× I think. It master. Nice to my healthy.

✓ I think it is good for my health.

形容词和副词使用错误，表达不准确。需要用正确的形容词和名词搭配。

× No becauses why were young my parents who always limited to me to add to. Snacks.

✓ No, because when I was young, my parents always limited me from eating snacks.

句子结构混乱，时态和词序错误，需调整为正确的时态和语序。

× I like it. Eating out your age are famous in China and the ages. Bing pro dog so each have much more protein.

✓ I like eating snacks that are famous in China, such as Bingdugou, because they have much more protein.

句子结构混乱，词汇拼写错误，表达不清晰，需要调整词序和用词。