Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question with a complete sentence and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually eat snacks after meals, especially when I feel a little hungry between main meals.

제안: Improve your grammar and sentence structure by combining ideas into coherent sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly, and provide specific reasons for your opinion.

예시: I think eating snacks is unhealthy because they often contain a lot of fat; however, they can make me feel happy and relaxed when I eat them.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a full sentence directly answering the question, and explain your reason clearly with proper grammar and vocabulary.

예시: No, I did not often eat snacks when I was young because my mother told me that snacks were bad for my health.

제안: Try to give a clear and complete answer with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'flavours' instead of 'favors'.

예시: I like to eat potato chips because they are a bit salty and very tasty. Besides that, I also enjoy snacks with spicy or sour flavours.

× I often it snakes after a meal.

✓ I often eat snacks after a meal.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used here; the verb 'eat' is missing. The correct sentence requires the verb 'eat' to indicate the action, and 'snakes' is a misspelling of 'snacks'.

× I often it snakes after a meal.

✓ I often eat snacks after a meal.

The word 'snakes' is a misspelling of 'snacks', which is plural. Using the correct plural form 'snacks' is necessary to match the intended meaning.

× When I feel a little bit of hungry.

✓ When I feel a little bit hungry.

The phrase 'a little bit of hungry' is incorrect because 'hungry' is an adjective and does not require 'of'. The correct structure is 'a little bit hungry'. Also, this is a dependent clause and should be connected to the main clause.

× I think that is unhealthy for me.

✓ I think that it is unhealthy for me.

The pronoun 'that' is used incorrectly here; 'it' is the correct pronoun to refer to the action or situation previously mentioned.

× Because it content a lot of fat.

✓ Because it contains a lot of fat.

The verb 'content' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'contains' in the third person singular present tense to agree with the subject 'it'.

× However. It can make me feel happy and relaxed when I eating snack.

✓ However, it can make me feel happy and relaxed when I am eating a snack.

The sentence is fragmented with a period after 'However'. It should be connected with a comma. Also, 'when I eating snack' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am eating a snack' to use the present continuous tense correctly and include the article 'a' before 'snack'.

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

✓ No correction needed.

The sentence is grammatically correct.

× No, I. So it's like when I was young.

✓ No, I didn't. So, it's like when I was young.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented. 'No, I.' is incomplete; it should be 'No, I didn't.' to answer the question properly. Also, 'So it's like when I was young.' is unclear and should be connected properly.

× Because my mom. And she told me that is. Spec for my healthy.

✓ Because my mom told me that it is bad for my health.

The sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'Because my mom.' is a fragment; it should be connected to the next clause. 'That is. Spec for my healthy.' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'that it is bad for my health' to convey the intended meaning.

× I like to eat. Potato chips because that is a bit salty.

✓ I like to eat potato chips because they are a bit salty.

The sentence is fragmented with a period after 'eat'. It should be one sentence. Also, 'that is' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural noun 'potato chips'.

× And it is very nice.

✓ And they are very nice.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to 'potato chips', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they' with the plural verb 'are'.

× Other than that, I like to. I also like to eat either favors, for example spicy or sour.

✓ Other than that, I also like to eat different flavours, for example spicy or sour.

The sentence is fragmented with 'I like to.' incomplete. 'Either favors' is incorrect; it should be 'different flavours' or 'either flavour'. Also, 'favors' is a misspelling of 'flavours'. The sentence should be combined for clarity.