Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိရန် ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစွာ ပြောဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ စကားလုံးများအချို့ မသင့်တော်သလို အနည်းငယ် မသိသာသော စကားလုံးများပါဝင်သည်။ သင်၏အဖြေကို တိုတောင်းပြီး သက်ဆိုင်ရာ အကြောင်းအရာနှင့် သက်ဆိုင်သော စကားလုံးများကို အသုံးပြုပါ။

예시: I usually eat snacks during my free time. However, when I am busy, I might skip snacks because I don't have time. It depends on my daily schedule and mood.

제안: အဖြေသည် ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းပြီး သက်ဆိုင်ရာ အကြောင်းအရာများကို တိကျစွာ ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ စကားလုံးများကို သင့်တော်စွာ အသုံးပြု၍ အကြောင်းပြချက်များနှင့် အထောက်အထားများကို ထည့်သွင်းပါ။

예시: I think eating snacks can be healthy if I choose nutritious options. However, when I am busy, I sometimes eat unhealthy snacks, which is not good for my health.

제안: အဖြေသည် ပိုမို သဘာဝကျပြီး တိကျစွာ ပြောဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ မသိသာသော စကားလုံးများကို ရှောင်ကြဉ်ပြီး သင့်တော်သော စကားလုံးများကို အသုံးပြုပါ။

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. My mother usually gave me snacks before dinner, and I enjoyed them very much.

제안: အဖြေကို ပိုမို သဘာဝကျပြီး သက်ဆိုင်ရာ စကားလုံးများနှင့် အကြောင်းအရာများကို တိကျစွာ ဖော်ပြပါ။ စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် ကြိုးစားပါ။

예시: My favorite snack is potato chips. I used to eat different kinds of snacks when I was young, and even now, I still enjoy eating crunchy and tasty potato chips.

× Why is depends on my situation.

✓ Why it depends on my situation.

The modal verb 'is' is incorrectly used here. The correct structure is 'it depends' without 'is'. The sentence should be 'Why it depends on my situation.' to be grammatically correct.

× Usually I eat snails on the free time.

✓ Usually I eat snacks in my free time.

The word 'snails' is likely a typo or incorrect word for 'snacks'. Also, 'on the free time' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in my free time'. This corrects both the noun and preposition usage.

× Hi Robin, I am busy an I have no time for it the mail I just take the snacks.

✓ Hi Robin, I am busy and I have no time for it, so I just take snacks.

The sentence has conjunction and article errors. 'an' should be 'and', 'the mail' is unclear and likely incorrect, and 'the snacks' should be 'snacks' without 'the'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Obama mice is not depend on my mood.

✓ Obama mice does not depend on my mood.

The modal verb 'is' is incorrectly used with 'depend'. The correct form is 'does not depend' for third person singular subjects. Also, 'Obama mice' seems unclear but is kept as is.

× Asterix I am concerned about my snack, but when I'm busy, I have no time for Milan.

✓ Actually, I am concerned about my snacks, but when I'm busy, I have no time for meals.

'Asterix' is likely a typo for 'Actually'. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match general meaning. 'Milan' is likely a typo for 'meals'. Modal verb usage is not directly involved but correcting vocabulary and article usage improves clarity.

× I have to rush for something.

✓ I have to rush to do something.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'rush'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating purpose.

× I have to eat snacks in order to.

✓ I have to eat snacks in order to keep going.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or purpose after 'in order to'. Adding a purpose completes the sentence.

× To guess Norma 8th so fair enough.

✓ To be honest, so far it's fair enough.

The sentence is unclear and likely contains typos. Correcting to a meaningful phrase improves clarity.

× Install the time is not healthy, but even in case eating snacks can be healthy.

✓ Most of the time, it is not healthy, but in some cases, eating snacks can be healthy.

'Install the time' is incorrect; 'most of the time' is correct. 'Even in case' should be 'in some cases'. Modal verb 'can' is correctly used here.

× Yes, I often a snacks when I was young.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young.

The verb 'a' is incorrect; the past tense of 'eat' is 'ate'. This corrects the past tense usage.

× Hi, well my mom always called me for 18 snacks before mail.

✓ Well, my mom always called me for snacks before meals.

'18 snacks' is likely a typo or unclear; 'snacks' is sufficient. 'Mail' should be 'meals'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used here.

× Anne. And that is?

✓ And that is?

'Anne.' is unclear and likely a typo or extraneous. Removing it improves sentence structure.

× My favorite snack is portrayed achieve however I also age previous kind of snaps when I was young an right now I am still eating cheap potato chip and it's so yummy, so chunky.

✓ My favorite snack is potato chips; however, I also ate previous kinds of snacks when I was young, and right now I am still eating cheap potato chips and they're so yummy and crunchy.

'Portrayed achieve' is likely a typo for 'potato chips'. 'Age' should be 'ate' for past tense. 'Snaps' should be 'snacks'. 'Chip' should be plural 'chips'. 'Chunky' is incorrect adjective; 'crunchy' is correct for chips. This corrects singular/plural and adjective usage.