Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、"when I feels tired"は"when I feel tired"が正しいです。また、"after walking the studying"は不自然で、"after walking or studying"などに修正が必要です。回答は5文以内にまとめ、自然で効果的な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel tired after walking or studying. I find that having a snack helps me relax and regain energy.

제안: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。"house"はおそらく"health"の誤りで、意味が通じません。回答は直接質問に答え、具体的な理由や努力について述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I know eating too many snacks is not good for my health. I am trying to reduce my snack intake, but sometimes it's hard to stop because I enjoy them.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、"my parents don't need to eat"は意味不明で、"my parents didn't want me to eat snacks"が適切です。回答は簡潔にし、具体的な理由や習慣を述べると良いでしょう。

예시: When I was a child, my parents didn't want me to eat snacks because they thought it was unhealthy. They always told me to brush my teeth after eating snacks, so I tried to avoid them.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。例えば、"up tips analisa counties"や"Maybe I solved it will be better full house"は意味不明です。具体的なスナックの名前を挙げ、時期による変化を明確に述べましょう。

예시: When I was a kid, I liked to eat potato chips and candies. But after I became a high school student, I started to prefer chocolate and rice crackers because they are tastier and less sweet.

× I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after walking the studying when I feels tired.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after walking or studying when I feel tired.

The verb 'feels' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I feel'. Also, 'walking the studying' is incorrect; it should be 'walking or studying' to make sense.

× I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after walking the studying when I feels tired.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon after walking or studying when I feel tired.

The phrase 'walking the studying' is incorrect; 'after walking or studying' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate activities after which the snacks are eaten.

× I'm trying to come.

✓ I'm trying to come.

This sentence is unclear and likely a misuse of words rather than a grammar error. No correction is made here as it does not fit the listed grammar problem types.

× I know it is not very good for house to eat Mac.

✓ I know it is not very good for me to eat snacks.

The pronoun 'house' is incorrect here; it should be 'me' to refer to oneself. Also, 'Mac' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'snacks'.

× I'm trying to reduce the taking snack intake of snack and I can't stop eating that one.

✓ I'm trying to reduce my snack intake, but I can't stop eating them.

The phrase 'the taking snack intake of snack' is incorrect. It should be 'my snack intake'. Also, 'that one' is vague; 'them' refers properly to snacks.

× When I was a child, my parents don't need to eat, don't want me to speech, snack.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't want me to eat snacks.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past context. It should be 'didn't'. Also, 'speech' is incorrect here and should be removed.

× On because it's not good for health and I always I was always told to brush my teeth after eating snacks.

✓ Because it's not good for health, I was always told to brush my teeth after eating snacks.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and unclear structure. 'On' is incorrect and should be removed. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× In it is a little bit tiring forming so I avoid eating snacks.

✓ It is a little bit tiring, so I avoid eating snacks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Removing 'In' and 'forming' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, I would say when I met when I was a kid I like to eat up tips analisa counties but after being maybe high school student I changed it to eat chocolate or rice crackers.

✓ Well, I would say when I was a kid, I liked to eat potato chips and candies, but after becoming a high school student, I changed to eating chocolate or rice crackers.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear words ('met', 'up tips analisa counties'). Correcting to 'was', 'liked', and proper snack names improves clarity and grammar.

× Maybe I solved it will be better full house.

✓ Maybe I should choose healthier snacks.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Replacing it with a clear, grammatically correct sentence that fits context is necessary.