Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较简短，缺少细节和连接词。建议增加具体场景描述，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I usually eat snacks when I watch a film or relax at home because it helps me feel more comfortable and enjoy the moment.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: I think eating a small amount of snacks is fine, but if I eat too many snacks, it can be unhealthy for me.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地回答问题。

예시: No, I didn't eat many snacks when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清楚。建议使用清晰的句子结构，明确说明喜欢的原因，并避免语法错误。

예시: I like eating cookies because they are sweet but not too sweet, and they satisfy my hunger so I don't want to eat more snacks.

× I think it is OK to eat little snacks, but if I eat more. Many snacks I will be unhealthy.

✓ I think it is OK to eat a few snacks, but if I eat too many snacks, I will be unhealthy.

这里的“little snacks”用法不当，应该用可数名词复数形式“a few snacks”表示少量的零食；另外“more. Many snacks”句子结构不完整且用词错误，应改为“too many snacks”表示过多的零食。

× No, I didn't eat a lot of Next and I was young when I was the children.

✓ No, I didn't eat a lot of snacks when I was young.

句中“Next”应为“snacks”的拼写错误；“when I was the children”结构错误，应为“when I was young”表示“我小时候”。

× My parents don't allow me to do that.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to do that.

根据上下文，描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去时，故“don't allow”应改为“didn't allow”。

× I like eating cookies very much because I think is sweet but not too much and it can make me fall so that I don't want to eat more snacks.

✓ I like eating cookies very much because I think they are sweet but not too much, and they can make me full so that I don't want to eat more snacks.

句中缺少主语“they”指代“cookies”，且“fall”应为“full”表示“饱”；代词使用错误导致句意不清。