Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan detail spesifik, serta hindari kata-kata yang tidak tepat atau membingungkan.

예시: I usually eat snacks during my work breaks. For example, I like to have some fruit or nuts because they help me relax and keep me full until my next meal.

제안: Perjelas pendapat dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dan gunakan kosa kata yang tepat. Jelaskan alasan secara spesifik dan hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau membingungkan.

예시: I think eating snacks can be healthy if we don't eat too much. For instance, eating a small portion of fruit between meals can keep our energy up without spoiling our appetite for lunch.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas. Berikan detail spesifik tentang kebiasaan makan camilan di masa kecil dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dan mudah dipahami.

예시: When I was young, I often ate snacks because my parents gave them to me as a reward. I especially liked sweet treats, so I probably ate snacks almost every day.

제안: Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan kosa kata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan jenis camilan favorit. Hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas dan pastikan jawaban terstruktur dengan baik.

예시: I mostly like healthy snacks like fruits and nuts. I think they help me stay healthy and keep me full for longer periods.

× I usually it's neck when I was a work break.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I have a work break.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear wording. 'It's neck' is not meaningful here. The correct structure is subject + verb + object/time phrase. 'I usually eat snacks when I have a work break' is clear and grammatically correct.

× I usually eat like a Fritz and also not.

✓ I usually eat fries and nuts.

The phrase 'like a Fritz and also not' is incorrect and unclear. 'Fritz' likely refers to 'fries' and 'not' to 'nuts'. Using correct nouns and removing 'like a' improves clarity and grammar.

× It can help me to improve my relax and also give me a full of Thai.

✓ They can help me relax and also make me feel full.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Improve my relax' should be 'help me relax'. 'Give me a full of Thai' is unclear; 'make me feel full' is appropriate.

× It's depend but I think if we didn't eat snack too much it can be healthy because if we eat a not too much snack we can.

✓ It depends, but I think if we don't eat too many snacks, it can be healthy.

'It's depend' should be 'It depends' (present tense). 'Didn't eat' is past tense, but the sentence is about general truth, so present tense 'don't eat' is correct. 'Too much snack' should be 'too many snacks' because 'snack' is countable here.

× Not it. Dinner in the noon.

✓ We won't eat dinner at noon.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. A complete sentence with subject and verb is needed. 'We won't eat dinner at noon' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× When I was young. I think I often it is neck.

✓ When I was young, I think I often ate snacks.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect words. 'It is neck' is incorrect; likely meant 'ate snacks'. Past tense 'ate' is appropriate for 'when I was young'.

× Dallas My parents usually give me a snack.

✓ Also, my parents usually gave me snacks.

'Dallas' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'also'. 'Give' should be past tense 'gave' to match 'when I was young'. 'A snack' can be plural 'snacks' for generality.

× I also like sweet foot so I think it's most like everyday.

✓ I also like sweet food, so I think I ate it almost every day.

'Sweet foot' should be 'sweet food'. 'Most like everyday' is incorrect; 'almost every day' is the correct adverbial phrase. Past tense 'ate' matches the time frame.

× I eating snake in when I was young.

✓ I ate snacks when I was young.

The sentence is ungrammatical. 'I eating snake in' is incorrect. Correct past tense verb 'ate' and correct noun 'snacks' are needed.

× I mostly like healthy snack like Fritz.

✓ I mostly like healthy snacks like fries.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match 'like fries'. 'Fritz' is likely 'fries'.

× What did Waylon and also not?

✓ What did I want and also nuts?

The original sentence is unclear and likely misheard. Possibly intended 'What did I want and also nuts?'. Needs clarification.

× I think it can give me more healthy body and also can make main more full.

✓ I think it can make my body healthier and also make me feel fuller.

'More healthy body' is incorrect; 'healthier body' is correct comparative adjective. 'Make main more full' should be 'make me feel fuller'.