Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但缺少直接回应问题的主题句，且句子结构较简单，建议增加主题句并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I usually avoid eating snacks because they are high in fat and sugar, and I need to watch my weight.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，内容不够清晰具体，建议使用准确的词汇表达健康风险，并避免语法错误。

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of fat and sugar, which can lead to health problems like diabetes and high blood pressure.

제안: 回答语句不连贯，表达不清晰，建议分句表达并使用连接词，明确说明情况和原因。

예시: When I was a child, I rarely ate snacks because my grandpa was very strict about my diet. He only allowed me to have snacks on special occasions like birthdays and festivals.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不自然，建议使用正确的时态和句型，并清晰表达喜好和原因。

예시: I enjoy eating junk food like chips and chocolate, even though I know they are not healthy. I usually eat them while watching dramas because it makes me feel satisfied.

× I really enjoying spending junk food like lot.

✓ I really enjoy eating junk food a lot.

句中 'enjoying' 用法错误，动词 'enjoy' 后应接动名词 'eating'，且 'spending' 用法不当，应改为 'eating'。此外，'like lot' 应为 'a lot'，表示频率或程度。正确表达为 'I really enjoy eating junk food a lot.'。

× When I watching dramas, I can get a sense of satisfaction.

✓ When I watch dramas, I can get a sense of satisfaction.

句中 'When I watching dramas' 中 'watching' 应为动词原形 'watch'，因为 'when' 引导的时间状语从句中动词应使用一般现在时。

× No I was a kid I lived with my grandpa he was so strict about snacks because he worried about my health in the taste I just a cute.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I lived with my grandpa. He was so strict about snacks because he worried about my health and the taste. I just ate snacks on special days like birthdays and festivals.

原句时态混乱，缺少标点，且表达不完整。'I just a cute' 应为 'I just ate snacks'，'birthday and 1st balls' 应为 'birthdays and festivals'。需要使用过去时态描述过去的习惯和事件。

× I believe that, uh, they could be our house.

✓ I believe that, uh, they could harm our body.

句中 'they could be our house' 语义不通，推测原意为 'they could harm our body'（它们可能伤害我们的身体）。'our house' 是错误的代词使用，应改为正确的宾语。

× Sometimes it could be called signals like orbiting diabetes and high blood pressure.

✓ Sometimes it could cause diseases like diabetes and high blood pressure.

'called signals like orbiting diabetes' 语法和表达错误，应改为 'cause diseases like diabetes'，'orbiting' 用词错误，应为 'diabetes'。此外，'called signals' 用法不当，正确表达为 'cause diseases'。