Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达时间和原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I usually eat snacks at night, especially after exercising or studying. When I have exams, I feel stressed and bored, so I eat snacks to help myself relax.

제안: 表达不够准确，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: I don't think snacks are healthy because they contain a lot of fat and sugar. However, when I am under a lot of pressure, eating snacks can help me relax and feel better mentally.

제안: 回答中有很多词汇错误和表达混乱，建议使用简单清晰的句子，准确表达童年时的零食习惯。

예시: When I was young, my parents didn't allow me to eat many snacks because they cared about my health. But at school, my friends often shared snacks with me, so I still ate some snacks then.

제안: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误，句子结构混乱。建议用简单句子表达喜欢的零食种类和原因。

예시: I like to eat spicy snacks, such as spicy nuts and dried fish. I think spicy food helps me relieve stress and makes me feel better.

× I usually eat things at night, especially being there because I always do exercise or a study for my.

✓ I usually eat things at night, especially there because I always do exercise or study for my exams.

这里的“being there”用法不正确，应直接使用“there”表示地点。动词“study”前不需要冠词“a”，且“study”作为动词时不加冠词。

× I usually eat things at night, especially being there because I always do exercise or a study for my.

✓ I usually eat things at night, especially there because I always do exercise or study for my exams.

“a study”错误地使用了不定冠词，study作为动词时不需要冠词。

× I usually eat things at night, especially being there because I always do exercise or a study for my.

✓ I usually eat things at night, especially there because I always do exercise or study for my exams.

“for my”后缺少名词，应补充“exams”使句子完整。

× Yeah, once exam at that time so I will feel stressed and bored.

✓ Yeah, once I have an exam at that time, I feel stressed and bored.

“once exam”缺少主语和谓语，且时态应与描述习惯动作一致，使用一般现在时。

× So I need to some snares to relax myself.

✓ So I need some snacks to relax myself.

“to some snares”中“to”多余且“snares”拼写错误，应为“snacks”。

× I do not think so be 'cause you know snacks are for all fat and sugar which not healthy for my body, but if I might is really under pressures it can make me relax.

✓ I do not think so because you know snacks are full of fat and sugar which are not healthy for my body, but if I am really under pressure, it can make me relax.

“be 'cause”应为“because”；“for all fat and sugar”应为“full of fat and sugar”；“which not healthy”缺少谓语动词“are”；“if I might is really under pressures”结构混乱，应为“if I am really under pressure”。

× I do not think so be 'cause you know snacks are for all fat and sugar which not healthy for my body, but if I might is really under pressures it can make me relax.

✓ I do not think so because you know snacks are full of fat and sugar which are not healthy for my body, but if I am really under pressure, it can make me relax.

“for all fat and sugar”应改为“full of fat and sugar”，表示“充满脂肪和糖分”。

× Maybe in this ways it can be good for my. Psycho.

✓ Maybe in this way it can be good for my psychology.

“in this ways”应为“in this way”，单数形式；“my. Psycho”不完整，应为“my psychology”。

× Oh, I do not offer instant apps because my parents are.

✓ Oh, I did not often eat instant snacks because my parents didn't allow it.

“do not offer”时态错误，应为过去时“did not often eat”；“instant apps”应为“instant snacks”；“because my parents are”不完整，应补充完整句子。

× My parents thought about my pills, so they don't allow me to eat snails spot.

✓ My parents thought about my health, so they didn't allow me to eat snacks a lot.

“thought about my pills”应为“thought about my health”；“snails spot”拼写错误，应为“snacks a lot”。

× When I was in school, my friends will share snacks with me, so it is an important way for me to eat snacks.

✓ When I was in school, my friends would share snacks with me, so it was an important way for me to eat snacks.

描述过去习惯动作时，助动词“will”应改为“would”；时态应保持一致，后半句用过去时“was”。

× I'd like to eat some spicy snacks, such awful plant base is made and some fish is because I think spicy things can build this by pressures and make me feel better so.

✓ I'd like to eat some spicy snacks, such as plant-based ones and some fish, because I think spicy things can relieve pressure and make me feel better.

“such awful plant base is made”表达混乱，应为“such as plant-based ones”；“build this by pressures”应为“relieve pressure”。

× It's good for me to have some spicy food.

✓ It's good for me to eat some spicy food.

“have some spicy food”虽可理解，但“eat some spicy food”更符合表达习惯。