Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주제 문장과 이유를 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I usually eat snacks when I need to concentrate on my work because they help me feel more energetic and focused.

제안: 답변이 중복되고 문법적 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 건강에 대한 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I think eating snacks is unhealthy because many of them contain a lot of sugar and salt, which can harm my body.

제안: 답변이 중복되고 문법적 오류가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 과거 습관에 대해 명확히 말하고, 구체적인 예를 들어 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I loved sweets and usually had them every day, even between meals.

제안: 답변이 중복되고 문법적 오류가 많아 명확한 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 좋아하는 간식과 그 이유를 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I like sweet snacks, especially chocolate, because its sweet taste makes me feel happier and gives me more energy.

× I usually it snags when I need to focus all my works because it's like snakes like feels like.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I need to focus on all my work because it feels like snacks.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and misuse of words ('it snags', 'snakes like feels like'). The correct sentence should have the verb 'eat' properly placed and 'work' used in singular form as an uncountable noun. Also, 'feels like snacks' is the intended meaning, so the phrase is reordered for clarity.

× Me to getting a booster to me so I it snacks every.

✓ It gives me a boost, so I eat snacks every time.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and lacks a proper verb structure. 'Me to getting' is incorrect; it should be 'It gives me'. Also, 'I it snacks every' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I eat snacks every time' or similar.

× Everyone, I need to focus on my words.

✓ Whenever I need to focus on my work.

'Everyone' is incorrectly used here; likely the intended word is 'every time' or 'whenever'. Also, 'my words' should be 'my work' to fit the context. The preposition 'on' is correct with 'focus'.

× I think it is unhealthy to me for me to eat snacks because if a lot of snacks contains like a lot of sugar in kind of salty, you know, So that's next.

✓ I think it is unhealthy for me to eat snacks because many snacks contain a lot of sugar and are kind of salty, you know, so that's why snacks are not healthy.

The sentence misuses pronouns ('to me for me'), and has subject-verb agreement errors ('snacks contains'). Also, 'next' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is not healthy. 4 hour body so I don't think it is healthy for me to me.

✓ They are not healthy for the body, so I don't think it is healthy for me.

'4 hour body' is incorrect; it should be 'for the body'. Also, 'for me to me' is redundant and incorrect. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and clarity.

× Absolutely, when I was a kid I like sweets like so much so I it snacks often like every day so.

✓ Absolutely, when I was a kid I liked sweets so much, so I ate snacks often, like every day.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I like' should be 'I liked' to match past tense context. 'I it snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'I ate snacks'. The sentence is corrected for past tense consistency.

× Even I it's next.

✓ Even then, I ate snacks.

'Even I it's next' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means 'Even then, I ate snacks.' The pronouns and words are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Even I eat snacks. Except for meal.

✓ I ate snacks except during meals.

The sentence fragments are incomplete and incorrectly use prepositions. 'Except for meal' should be 'except during meals' to indicate the time when snacks are not eaten.

× I really like sweet snacks, for example the chocolate snacks because of sweet taste.

✓ I really like sweet snacks, for example, chocolate snacks because of their sweet taste.

The phrase 'because of sweet taste' lacks a determiner; it should be 'their sweet taste'. Also, a comma is added after 'for example' for correct punctuation.

× Sweetest feels like chocolate and chocolate gives me a better conditions because it gives me a color booster to me so.

✓ The sweetness of chocolate gives me better energy because it acts as a booster for me.

'Sweetest feels like chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'The sweetness of chocolate'. 'Better conditions' is vague; 'better energy' is clearer. 'Color booster' is likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'booster' is used to mean energy or alertness. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I've.

✓ I've explained.

The sentence fragment 'I've.' is incomplete and unclear. It likely intends to say 'I've explained' or similar. The correction completes the sentence.