Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using simple sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually eat snacks when I go outside. Recently, I visited Prayagraj for the Mahakumbh festival, where I tried some famous local snacks. They were very delicious. So, I often eat snacks when I am out exploring new places.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the health issues. Keep sentences clear and concise.

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks like burgers and pizzas is healthy. Earlier, I faced health problems such as indigestion and weight gain because of these foods. Therefore, I now avoid such snacks to maintain good health.

제안: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. Use specific examples of snacks you ate when young and avoid irrelevant details.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I especially liked small sweets and local snacks that were famous in my hometown. For example, I enjoyed Punjabi snacks like samosas and pakoras, which I still like to eat occasionally.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some incorrect words. Try to clearly list the snacks you like and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and keep your answer natural and coherent.

예시: I like to eat spicy snacks such as burgers, noodles, and pizza. These foods are my favourites because they have strong flavours and are very tasty.

× Text now.

✓ Right now.

The phrase 'Text now' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant to say 'Right now' to indicate the current time. 'Text' is a noun or verb unrelated to time reference here.

× When I going to outside like recently I was went to the Prayagraj for Mahakam at their I explore famous food of their like that was so delicious.

✓ When I go outside, like recently I went to Prayagraj for Mahakumbh. There, I explored famous food which was so delicious.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'I going' should be 'I go' for present tense. 'I was went' is incorrect; past tense 'I went' is correct. 'At their' should be 'there'. 'I explore' should be past tense 'I explored' to match the past event. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I think I usually eat there when I going to outside photo.

✓ So I think I usually eat there when I go outside.

'I going to outside photo' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I go outside'. The word 'photo' is unnecessary and confusing here. The verb should be in present tense 'go' to match 'usually eat'.

× No I think it's not healthy for our health becauses I remember earlier when I eat something snacks like burger pizzas I faced multiple health issues but now I avoid these types of things because there are a lot of bad impact for our health.

✓ No, I think it's not healthy for our health because I remember earlier when I ate snacks like burgers and pizzas, I faced multiple health issues. But now I avoid these types of things because they have a lot of bad impact on our health.

The sentence has tense and article errors. 'When I eat' should be past tense 'when I ate' to match 'I faced'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Burger pizzas' should be pluralized and separated as 'burgers and pizzas'. 'There are a lot of bad impact' should be 'they have a lot of bad impact' for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Yes, I only eat your snacks and toys of month then I going to in my hometown city as well as I prefer to eat small motors which was very famous in my hometown as well as I prefer to eat shortly but today which is famous Punjabi food.

✓ Yes, I only ate your snacks and toys once a month. Then I went to my hometown city. I also preferred to eat small motors which were very famous in my hometown. I also preferred to eat shortly, but today I like famous Punjabi food.

The sentence has multiple tense errors. 'I only eat' should be past tense 'I only ate' to match the past context. 'I going to' should be 'I went to'. 'Which was' should be 'which were' to agree with plural 'small motors'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs separation for clarity.

× So these types of food I really like to eat in twice a month.

✓ So I really like to eat these types of food twice a month.

The phrase 'in twice a month' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted. The sentence is reordered for natural English word order. 'I really like to eat these types of food twice a month' is correct.

× I like to eat. Strategies like Politica as well as prefer to eat spicy food like burger, noodles, pizza.

✓ I like to eat snacks like samosas and pakoras, and I also prefer to eat spicy food like burgers, noodles, and pizza.

'Strategies like Politica' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misspelling. It is corrected to common Indian snacks 'samosas and pakoras'. The sentence lacked a subject in the second clause, so 'I also' is added for clarity. Plural forms 'burgers' and proper commas are used.