Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免断句不完整，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks on weekends because I often go for picnics with my friends. During these outings, we enjoy delicious snacks together.

제안: 表达有些重复且语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I think eating too many snacks is unhealthy because they usually contain a lot of oil, which can harm our physical health.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，注意句子结构和时态，避免断句和拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I used to eat snacks very often when I was a child. I loved them so much that I always asked my mother to buy snacks for me.

제안: 回答中出现了词汇错误（如'sheep'），表达不连贯。建议使用正确的词汇，句子结构完整，并用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I like to eat cheap snacks like ice cream because I enjoy their flavors. They always bring me a sense of joy.

× Recently I open it snacks during the weekend.

✓ Recently I have been opening snacks during the weekend.

句中“open”应使用现在完成进行时态，表示最近一段时间的持续动作，需用“have been opening”。

× That's becaused.

✓ That's because.

“becaused”是错误形式，正确应为“because”，表示原因。

× During the weekends I often go for a picnic with my friends, so during this time we often can enjoy the delicious snacks.

✓ During the weekends, I often go for a picnic with my friends, so during this time we can often enjoy delicious snacks.

“often can”词序错误，应为“can often”；“the delicious snacks”中“the”不必要，且“snacks”前不需冠词。

× Now I would like to say.

✓ Now I would like to say that

句子不完整，缺少宾语从句，需加“that”引导。

× It is unhealthy to eat a lot of snack.

✓ It is unhealthy to eat a lot of snacks.

“snack”应为复数形式“snacks”，因为“a lot of”后接可数名词需用复数。

× That's becauses it is quite obvious that snacks tend to include a lot of oil, which is bad for our physical health.

✓ That's because it is quite obvious that snacks tend to include a lot of oil, which is bad for our physical health.

“becauses”拼写错误，正确为“because”。

× And I was a little girl.

✓ When I was a little girl,

句子不完整，需加时间状语引导，且与上下文连贯。

× I can't get enough of the snacks.

✓ I couldn't get enough of the snacks.

描述过去习惯，情态动词应使用过去式“could”。

× I mean, totally foodie.

✓ I mean, I was totally a foodie.

“totally foodie”缺少谓语和冠词，需补充完整句子。

× Especially during the.

✓ Especially during that time,

句子不完整，缺少时间状语，需补充完整。

× We can.

✓ we could.

句子不完整且时态错误，描述过去习惯应使用“could”。

× I tend to ask my mother's to buy snacks for me.

✓ I tended to ask my mother to buy snacks for me.

“mother's”错误使用所有格，应为“mother”；时态应为过去式“tended”。

× I prefer to eat sheep.

✓ I prefer to eat sheep snacks.

“sheep”单独使用不合适，应补充名词“snacks”表示零食种类。

× Cheap snacks.

✓ cheap snacks.

句子不完整，应与前句合并或补充谓语。

× An ice cream.

✓ an ice cream.

句子不完整，应与前句合并或补充谓语。

× That's be 'cause I like the flavor of them.

✓ That's because I like the flavor of them.

“be 'cause”拼写错误，应为“because”。

× They always can bring me a sense of joy.

✓ They can always bring me a sense of joy.

情态动词“can”后副词位置错误，应为“can always”。