Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic, tránh câu ngắt quãng và từ không đúng ngữ cảnh.

예시: I usually don't eat snacks these days because I want to keep my body fit and stay healthy. However, sometimes I enjoy a small snack while watching films at home.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác hoặc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và có lý do cụ thể.

예시: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because most snacks are fried and can make me gain weight. Therefore, I try to avoid them.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do và dùng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks every night when I was young because I didn't know much about healthy and clean food at that time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ tên món ăn, số lượng và lý do thích, đồng thời dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết hợp lý.

예시: I am a big fan of Oreo cookies. I usually eat two at a time because I really enjoy their sweet and creamy taste.

× Recently. I don't eat snacks. To keep. My body fit and stay healthy.

✓ Recently, I don't eat snacks to keep my body fit and stay healthy.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Map OK, sometime I. I also is nice when I watch. Uhm, films. At my home.

✓ Sometimes, I also enjoy watching films at my home.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. Correcting pronoun usage and restructuring the sentence makes it grammatically correct and understandable.

× Absolutely no. Snacks. Is Fry's foot. Ennis get my body. Overweight. Overweight an. I think it's dumb. Good.

✓ Absolutely not. Snacks are fried food and make my body overweight. I think it's not good.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('Snacks is') and unclear wording. Correcting the verb to plural form and clarifying the meaning improves grammar and comprehension.

× I would say yes, I opt in each night when I was young. Be 'cause. Aye. I don't have knowledge a lot about. Healthy and clean food. And now is it chain?

✓ I would say yes, I ate snacks every night when I was young because I didn't have much knowledge about healthy and clean food. And now it has changed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs for past events and has fragmented sentences. Using past tense verbs and combining fragments corrects the tense and sentence structure.

× I am a big fan of. Oscar Leigh. Yeah, I usually eat 2 each other. Because. The. From the name of snack is. If I must fall. An E city.

✓ I am a big fan of Oreo. Yeah, I usually eat two at a time because the name of the snack is Oreo.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and clarifying the snack name improves grammatical correctness and clarity.