Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用连词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the evening because I tend to feel hungry at that time, so I like to have something to eat.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不够具体。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并具体说明原因。

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many snacks contain a lot of fat and sugar, which can be harmful to our health.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并适当扩展内容。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because even though they were unhealthy, I found them very delicious and hard to resist.

제안: 句子不完整且语法错误较多。建议练习完整句子表达，使用恰当的词汇描述喜好。

예시: My favorite snacks are chips because they contain a lot of salt, which makes them very tasty to me.

× I usually eat snacks in the evening because at that time. I am more likely to. Feel hungry so I will it sound snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening because at that time I am more likely to feel hungry, so I will eat snacks.

原句中断句不当，导致句子结构混乱。应将断句合并，去除多余的句号，使句子连贯通顺。

× No, because some of them in cruise. Most up. Fat and sugar is unhealthy for people to eat snacks.

✓ No, because some of them contain a lot of fat and sugar, which is unhealthy for people to eat as snacks.

原句中“in cruise”用词错误，应为“contain a lot of fat and sugar”。另外，句子断句不当，需调整句子结构使其表达清晰。

× Yes, because although is unhealthy for my body. It's still delicious food. For me to eat.

✓ Yes, because although it is unhealthy for my body, it's still delicious food for me to eat.

原句断句错误，导致句子不完整。应将句子合并，补充主语“it”，使句子完整通顺。

× My favorite snacks. Are chips because is more salt in there is very delicious for me.

✓ My favorite snacks are chips because there is more salt in them and they are very delicious to me.

原句中“is more salt”应为“there is more salt”，“chips”是复数，后续动词和代词也应使用复数形式。句子结构需调整以表达清晰。