Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“fascinated in snack”应为“fascinated by snacks”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数形式。

예시: I usually eat snacks like chocolates, cakes, and cookies almost every day. Eating snacks makes me feel happy because it releases feel-good chemicals in my brain.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且用词错误，如“mount of snacks”应为“a large amount of snacks”。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: I think eating a large amount of snacks is unhealthy because they contain high sugar and calories. Therefore, it is important to balance snacks with healthy food.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误，如“next”应为“snacks”，“teams”应为“teeth”。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确单词，并使句子更连贯。

예시: Compared to now, I ate fewer snacks when I was young because my parents only allowed me to have sweets like chocolates once a week. They thought eating too many snacks was bad for my teeth.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子断裂，且用词错误，如“next word”无意义。建议用完整句子表达喜好，并说明原因。

예시: My favorite snacks are cakes, chocolate chips, and cookies. I prefer these because they taste sweet, although they are high in sugar and calories.

× I am fascinated in snack.

✓ I am fascinated by snacks.

动词fascinated后面应接介词by，表示被某物吸引。这里应使用by而不是in。

× I eat snack almost everyday like chocolates, cakes, cookies and so on.

✓ I eat snacks almost every day like chocolates, cakes, cookies and so on.

snack应使用复数形式snacks，因为指的是多种零食。everyday应分开写为every day，表示“每天”。

× Or when I eating snacks, my brain can release some feel good chemistries and give me a sense of happiness.

✓ Or when I am eating snacks, my brain can release some feel-good chemicals and give me a sense of happiness.

动词eat在进行时态中应使用be动词+动词ing形式，即am eating。feel good应连写为feel-good作形容词修饰chemicals。chemistries用词不当，应为chemicals。

× eating mount of snacks are incredible on hills healthy because they are high in sugar and calorie in.

✓ eating a large amount of snacks is incredibly unhealthy because they are high in sugar and calories.

mount应为amount，且前面需加冠词a。amount是不可数名词，谓语动词用单数is。incredible on hills healthy表达不正确，应为incredibly unhealthy。calorie应为复数calories。

× Additionally, we need to keep a balance between each snacks and healthy food.

✓ Additionally, we need to keep a balance between snacks and healthy food.

each后面应接单数名词，snacks为复数，故去掉each。

× compare with now, I ate less next when I was young because my parents only allowed me.

✓ Compared with now, I ate fewer snacks when I was young because my parents only allowed me.

compare应为过去分词Compared作状语。less用于不可数名词，snacks为可数名词，应使用fewer。next应为snacks。

× It sounds next like chocolates and sweets only once a week because they they think snack too much.

✓ I was allowed to eat snacks like chocolates and sweets only once a week because they thought snacks were too much.

It sounds不合适，改为I was allowed to eat更符合语境。they they重复，应删去一个。think应为过去时thought。snack应为复数snacks。

× Snacks were bad for our teams.

✓ Snacks were bad for our bodies.

teams（团队）与语境不符，应为bodies（身体）。

× my favourites. Next word. Manifold like cakes, chocolate chips.

✓ My favorite snacks are many, like cakes, chocolate chips,

favourites应为favorite snacks，manifold用法不当，改为are many。

× And cookies I I prefer.

✓ and cookies I prefer.

重复的I应去掉。

× All foods high in sugar and calorie.

✓ All foods are high in sugar and calories.

缺少be动词are。calorie应为复数calories。