Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak naturally and clearly start with a direct topic sentence about the weather, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (verb forms and articles) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep answers to a maximum of 4–5 sentences.

예시: Where I live the weather is usually hot and humid because Thailand has a tropical climate. For example, daytime temperatures often reach the mid-30s Celsius, and heavy rainfalls are common during the monsoon season. Because of the humidity, people often use air conditioning and carry umbrellas.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases; use linking words such as 'because' and 'also'.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and relaxing. For instance, I enjoy wearing sweaters and drinking hot coffee, and I can sleep better when it's cool. Also, cooler weather makes outdoor walks more pleasant.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add one specific example and a linking phrase to make it more natural and slightly longer while staying within the sentence limit.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to travel and spend time outdoors. For example, on dry days I can commute by bicycle without worrying about rain, which saves time and is more comfortable.

제안: Good concise response. To improve, add a frequency word and a small detail about where you check the forecast to sound more fluent and natural.

예시: Yes, I do. I usually check the weather forecast on my phone every morning before going to work because I don't want to get caught in the rain, and I also check an hour before I leave if it looks cloudy.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct verb tenses. Give two specific effects with brief explanations and use linking words (for example, moreover). Avoid vague phrases and improve word choice (e.g., 'heatwaves', 'extreme weather events').

예시: I think climate change has caused higher temperatures and more extreme weather events in recent years. For example, there are more frequent heatwaves and stronger storms, which can lead to floods and damage to communities.

제안: Good clear answer with personal opinion. Improve by providing a specific reason and a short example of an activity you'd like to try in a colder climate to make the response more vivid.

예시: Yes, definitely. I would like to visit countries with colder climates such as South Korea because Thailand is hot most of the year. For instance, I would love to see snow, try winter sports, and enjoy hot soups and cafés in a chilly town.

× Do better. Where I live is usually hot and humid because Thailand is a tropical country. Sometime it learn a lot especially during the rain season.

✓ Where I live is usually hot and humid because Thailand is a tropical country. Sometimes it rains a lot, especially during the rainy season.

The original contains broken or irrelevant phrase 'Do better' and incorrect word forms. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb), 'it learn a lot' is ungrammatical — the intended meaning is that 'it rains a lot' so use the verb 'rain' in present tense third-person singular 'rains.' 'rain season' should be 'rainy season.' Remove 'Do better' because it does not answer the question. ID:26

× I prefer cold weather because it feel more comfortable and relaxing eye on eye.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and relaxing.

The subject 'it' requires third-person singular verb 'feels' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'eye on eye' is incorrect and unnecessary; remove it. Keep the sentence concise and grammatically correct. ID:27

× Also enjoy wearing sweater and do thinking thinking hot coffee.

✓ I also enjoy wearing sweaters and drinking hot coffee.

This sentence lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect verb forms. Add subject 'I.' Use plural 'sweaters' or 'a sweater' depending on meaning. 'Do thinking thinking' is meaningless; the intended verb is 'drink' in gerund form 'drinking' to match 'enjoy.' Use parallel structure: 'enjoy wearing... and drinking...'. ID:26

× Yes I do. I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before going to work because I don't want to get caught in the rain.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before going to work because I don't want to get caught in the rain.

Main issue is punctuation: add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech writing. The rest of the sentence is correct; present continuous notion 'going' is a gerund after 'before.' No tense change needed. ID:10

× Well, I think climate change had caught hotter weather and more natural disaster like flash and storms.

✓ Well, I think climate change has caused hotter weather and more natural disasters like flash floods and storms.

Use present perfect 'has caused' to describe recent changes continuing to present. 'Had caught' is incorrect here. 'More natural disaster' should be plural 'natural disasters.' 'Flash' alone is incomplete; the correct term is 'flash floods.' ID:5

× The weather had become less predictable that these days.

✓ The weather has become less predictable these days.

Use present perfect 'has become' rather than past perfect 'had become' to indicate a change that affects the present. Remove incorrect word 'that.' ID:6

× Yes, definitely. I love to visit country with colder weather like Korea or Australia because Thailand is hot almost all years now.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would love to visit countries with colder weather, like Korea or Australia, because Thailand is hot for most of the year now.

'Visit country' needs an article or plural: use 'countries' for general statement. 'I love to visit' is acceptable but 'I would love to visit' is more natural for desires about future trips. 'Almost all years' is unnatural; use 'for most of the year' or 'almost all year.' Add commas around the example phrase. Correct article and plural usage. ID:22