Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Correct factual phrasing and avoid irrelevant expressions. Use linking words if you add extra information.

예시: I live in Thailand, and the weather is generally hot. For example, summer temperatures often reach around 35°C, and even in winter it remains warm compared with temperate countries.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason using correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and keep to two or three sentences. Use a linking word to explain your reason.

예시: I prefer cold weather when I travel abroad because I enjoy wearing warm clothes. For instance, I like putting on a thick coat and scarf, which feels comfortable and protects my skin.

제안: State your preference then provide one specific consequence or reason. Use correct collocations (dry skin, health problems) and a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer wet weather because it keeps my skin from getting too dry. When I visited dry areas, my skin became very irritated and I developed minor breathing discomfort.

제안: Answer the question directly about frequency and timing. Use simple, correct sentences and clear verbs (check, follow). Avoid invented words and explain briefly why you check or don't check the forecast.

예시: I rarely check the weather forecast because the climate here is quite stable and usually hot. I only look at forecasts before long trips or outdoor events.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with a specific example and a linking phrase. Use accurate comparative language (warmer, increased temperatures) and units correctly.

예시: I think climate change has made temperatures warmer in recent years. For example, summers in Thailand used to be about 35°C, but lately peak temperatures have exceeded 40°C, causing more heatwaves.

제안: Respond with a clear preference and give one or two specific destinations and reasons. Use correct grammar (I would like to visit, because) and link your ideas with conjunctions.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy cooler weather. For example, I want to visit cities in Europe or northern China to experience snowy winters and milder summers.

× I live in Thailand where is located nearby the middle of the world, so the weather here is so hot in the summer and still hot in winter season.

✓ I live in Thailand, which is located near the equator, so the weather here is very hot in summer and still hot in winter.

The original has preposition and relative clause errors: 'where is located nearby the middle of the world' is incorrect. Use 'which is located near the equator' or 'near the middle of the world'. 'Nearby' is an adjective/adverb, not correct with 'located' here. Also use 'in summer' and 'in winter' (no 'season'), and 'very hot' is more natural than 'so hot'. Make these changes to correct preposition and relative clause usage.

× I prefer cold weather when I go abroad.

✓ I prefer cold weather when I go abroad.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. 'I prefer' matches the subject 'I' and the verb form is correct. No change needed.

× I like the weather in other country very much and I found out when it's too cold I can find the thick cold to protect my skin.

✓ I like the weather in other countries very much, and I found that when it's very cold I can wear thick clothes to protect my skin.

Errors: 'in other country' should be plural or use 'another country' so use 'in other countries.' 'Found out' is unnatural here; use 'found that.' 'Too cold' is fine but 'find the thick cold' is meaningless; likely intended 'wear thick clothes'. 'Thick cold' is incorrect; replace with 'thick clothes.' Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× I prefer wet weather when I travel abroad.

✓ I prefer wet weather when I travel abroad.

This sentence is correct as written. The present simple 'prefer' and present general reference 'when I travel' are appropriate. No correction needed.

× I found that when I went to dry county it can cause my skin dry and many health problem.

✓ I found that when I went to a dry country it caused my skin to become dry and caused many health problems.

Problems: 'dry county' should be 'dry country' (spelling). Tense consistency: 'I found that when I went' (past) should pair with past 'it caused.' Use 'caused my skin to become dry' or 'made my skin dry.' 'Many health problem' needs plural 'problems.' Also add article 'a' before 'dry country.'

× I live in Thailand where have only one season which is summer.

✓ I live in Thailand, where there is only one season, which is summer.

Missing 'there' in the existential construction: 'where have only one season' is ungrammatical. Use 'where there is only one season.' Also add commas to set off the relative clause.

× I very shake forecastination about weather because it's stable in Thailand, only hot.

✓ I hardly check the weather forecast because the weather in Thailand is stable and usually hot.

Original has nonwords and wrong adverb placement: 'very shake forecastination' is meaningless. Likely intended 'I rarely/ hardly check the weather forecast.' Use 'hardly check the weather forecast' and rephrase 'because it's stable in Thailand, only hot' to 'because the weather in Thailand is stable and usually hot.' This fixes word choice and sentence structure.

× I noticed that the temperature nowadays is more warm, noticeable in the past.

✓ I have noticed that temperatures nowadays are warmer compared with the past.

Use present perfect 'have noticed' to refer to a recent trend. 'Is more warm' is incorrect; use 'are warmer.' 'Noticeable in the past' is reversed; say 'compared with the past.' Also plural 'temperatures' is more natural when discussing general temperature trends.

× In Thailand, the temperature in summer is around 35 Celsius, but nowadays is more than 40 Celsius already.

✓ In Thailand, summer temperatures are around 35 degrees Celsius, but nowadays they can exceed 40 degrees Celsius.

Add 'degrees' with Celsius and pluralize 'temperatures' for generality. Include subject 'they' for the second clause. 'More than 40 Celsius already' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'can exceed 40 degrees Celsius.'

× I love visit other city which have different climate form Thailand so much.

✓ I love visiting other cities that have different climates from Thailand so much.

Verb pattern: after 'love' use gerund 'visiting.' 'Other city' should be plural 'other cities' or 'another city.' 'Which have' is acceptable but 'that have' is more common; 'different climate form Thailand' has errors: use plural 'climates' and preposition 'from' (not 'form').

× The main reason that why I love travel about because of the weather.

✓ The main reason I love to travel is because of the weather.

Original has redundant and incorrect conjunctions: 'The main reason that why' should be 'The main reason' or 'The reason why'; do not combine both. Use infinitive 'to travel' after 'love.' Remove the extraneous preposition 'about.'

× I prefer cold weather so I need to go Europe or the north of China.

✓ I prefer cold weather so I need to go to Europe or northern China.

Add preposition 'to' before 'Europe.' Use 'northern China' or 'the north of China' but 'northern China' is more natural. Also remove article before China. This fixes preposition and style.