Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接描述天气特点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

예시: The weather where I live is generally sunny and mild. We experience all four seasons distinctly, with each season bringing its own unique charm.

제안: 回答时应避免口语填充词，表达更简洁明了。可以增加原因说明，使内容更具体。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to stay warm by wearing extra clothes, whereas hot weather can be uncomfortable and hard to cool down.

제안: 回答应更有条理，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时具体说明喜欢干燥天气的原因。

예시: I prefer dry weather because, although it requires more skin care, it keeps my clothes dry and comfortable throughout the day.

제안: 回答应更准确，避免语法错误，表达时间频率时更清晰。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast twice a week, each time for the next three days. I do this every morning right after I get out of bed.

제안: 回答应更完整，使用正确的时态和连接词，具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: I believe climate change has caused summers to become hotter and winters colder. This is mainly due to the greenhouse effect increasing global temperatures.

제안: 回答应避免语法错误，使用更准确的词汇表达观点，句子结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, I enjoy traveling to cities with different climates because it broadens my horizons and helps me become more open-minded.

× Well the weather where I live is always sunny and very gentle maybe and it is very four season, like 4 season every season is.

✓ Well, the weather where I live is always sunny and very gentle, maybe, and it has four seasons, like 4 seasons every year.

这里的错误是单复数问题，“four season”应为“four seasons”，因为一年有四个季节，需用复数形式。

× Well the weather where I live is always sunny and very gentle maybe and it is very four season, like 4 season every season is.

✓ Well, the weather where I live is always sunny and very mild, maybe, and it has four seasons, like 4 seasons every year.

“very gentle”用来形容天气不合适，应该用“mild”表示温和的天气。

× I think I prefer cold because when you feel cold you can, you know, just put on more clothes, but when you are hot you cannot take off all the clothes.

✓ I think I prefer cold because when I feel cold I can, you know, just put on more clothes, but when I am hot I cannot take off all the clothes.

这里代词使用错误，前后应保持一致，不能先用“you”再用“you”，应统一用“I”。

× I think I prefer dry instead of wet weather, although you need to pay more attention to your skin but it is better for the clothes to be dry.

✓ I think I prefer dry rather than wet weather, although you need to pay more attention to your skin, but it is better for clothes to be dry.

“prefer ... instead of ...”用法不当，正确表达是“prefer ... rather than ...”。

× Yes, I think I will check the weather forecast maybe twice a week, each for three day.

✓ Yes, I think I will check the weather forecast maybe twice a week, each time for three days.

“each for three day”中“day”应为复数“days”，且表达不完整，需加“each time”。

× I usually check the weather forecast in the morning as soon as I get up in the bed.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast in the morning as soon as I get up from the bed.

“get up in the bed”用法错误，正确表达是“get up from the bed”，表示从床上起来。

× I think everyone can feel that it is get hotter in summer and colder in winter.

✓ I think everyone can feel that it is getting hotter in summer and colder in winter.

“it is get hotter”时态错误，应使用现在进行时“it is getting hotter”。

× Yes, I like traveling to other places and I like to experience things that different from where I live.

✓ Yes, I like traveling to other places and I like to experience things that are different from where I live.

“things that different”缺少系动词“are”，应为“things that are different”。

× I think it burden my horizon and make me more open minded.

✓ I think it broadens my horizon and makes me more open-minded.

“it burden my horizon”结构错误，动词用错，应为“broadens my horizon”，且“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”，形容词“open minded”应连写为“open-minded”。