Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e boro sentence use koren, kintu sentence gulo clear na ar kichu word er use vul ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje ar shothik vabe bolte, jate shuney buste sohoj hoy. Apni sentence gulo ke choto kore, ar linking word use kore answer ke logical banan.

예시: The weather where I live is usually humid and quiet in the morning. Sometimes, it becomes mild because of the monsoon season. Also, we often experience heavy rainfall during this time.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache. Apni chesta korun shothik grammar use korte ar clear vabe bolte. Apni linking word use kore contrast ta bhalo vabe express korte paren.

예시: I always prefer cold weather because I find it easier to engage in outdoor activities like jogging, cycling, and swimming. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel sticky and less productive.

제안: Apni kichu word ar grammar e vul korchen. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ar shobdo diye bolte. Apni linking word use kore sentence gulo ke logical banan.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to do outdoor activities like traveling, swimming with friends or family, and cycling. These activities make me feel more energized after a long day of work.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu word ar sentence structure vul ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ar shobdo diye bolte. Apni clear vabe bolun keno apni weather forecast check koren.

예시: I regularly check the weather forecast as part of my morning routine before going to the office. This helps me prepare, like taking an umbrella if needed, so I always stay ready.

제안: Apnar answer e onek grammar ar word choice er problem ache, jar fole meaning clear hoy na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ar shobdo diye sohoje ar clear vabe bolte. Apni specific karon ar effect bole answer ke boro korun.

예시: In recent years, climate change has caused drastic weather changes. For example, heavy rainfall has increased because of deforestation and less protection of the environment.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ar shobdo diye bolte. Apni linking word use kore sentence gulo ke logical banan ar clear vabe express korun apnar feelings.

예시: I would like to visit cities with different climates because I live in a metropolitan area where it rarely rains. Visiting a city with heavy rainfall would be a mesmerizing experience for me.

× Where I live right now it's a typical quiet and humid temperature in the morning, but by often sometime it mild a temperature and because of monsoon season and also sometimes it's heavy rainfall and.

✓ Where I live right now, the weather is typically quiet and humid in the morning, but often it becomes mild because of the monsoon season, and sometimes there is heavy rainfall.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'mild a temperature' and lacks proper verb forms. 'Mild' should be used as an adjective describing 'weather' or 'temperature', and the verb 'becomes' is needed to indicate change. Also, 'by often sometime' is incorrect; 'often' or 'sometimes' should be used properly. The sentence structure is corrected to properly express the idea in English.

× I always prefer to cold weather because it I find it easily engaging outdoor activities like jogging, cycling, swimming.

✓ I always prefer cold weather because I find it easier to engage in outdoor activities like jogging, cycling, and swimming.

The phrase 'prefer to cold weather' is incorrect; 'prefer cold weather' is correct without 'to'. Also, 'find it easily engaging' is awkward; 'find it easier to engage in' is the correct expression. Prepositions like 'in' are necessary after 'engage' to indicate participation in activities.

× In contrast, tailoring our weather makes me feel a very leather stick and less productive.

✓ In contrast, tailoring weather makes me feel very lethargic and less productive.

The phrase 'tailoring our weather' is unclear and likely incorrect; possibly 'tailoring' is a mishearing or typo for 'altering' or 'changing'. Also, 'a very leather stick' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'lethargic'. Pronouns and word choice are corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer a dry weather because it find easily outdoor activities like travel anywhere or swimming with friends or family and also cycling activities which makes me feel more energized after a long term work.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I find it easier to do outdoor activities like traveling anywhere, swimming with friends or family, and cycling, which make me feel more energized after long-term work.

'A dry weather' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'it find easily outdoor activities' is incorrect; 'I find it easier to do outdoor activities' is correct. The verb forms and article usage are corrected to fit standard English grammar.

× I regularly check weather forecast. Actually it's my morning routine whenever I go to office at that time I I check it because I prepare for MMM to keep my an umbrella and also it's really easy for me to preparation. That is why I always check.

✓ I regularly check the weather forecast. Actually, it's my morning routine whenever I go to the office; at that time, I check it because I prepare to keep an umbrella, and it's really easy for me to prepare. That is why I always check.

'Check weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Similarly, 'go to office' requires 'the office'. 'Prepare for MMM to keep my an umbrella' is unclear and corrected to 'prepare to keep an umbrella'. Also, 'easy for me to preparation' should be 'easy for me to prepare'. Articles and verb forms are corrected for clarity and correctness.

× In and the in recent years, weather, weather climate change is really drastically because nowadays there's heavy rainfall due to due to less unprotection and ferment and also cut down the trees and so that I believe.

✓ In recent years, climate change has been really drastic because nowadays there's heavy rainfall due to less protection and deforestation, and also cutting down trees, so I believe that.

The sentence has tense and word choice errors. 'Weather climate change is really drastically' is incorrect; 'climate change has been really drastic' is correct. 'Less unprotection and ferment' is unclear; corrected to 'less protection and deforestation'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I would say I would like to visit city because there climate change are truly different and actually I live in a metropolitan area so that I don't get any chance to have a rainfall. If I would visit the select city I will definitely so heavy rainfall which is mesmerizing a feeling for me.

✓ I would say I would like to visit a city because their climate is truly different. Actually, I live in a metropolitan area, so I don't get much rainfall. If I visit such a city, I will definitely experience heavy rainfall, which is a mesmerizing feeling for me.

'Visit city' needs an article 'a city'. 'There climate change are' is incorrect; corrected to 'their climate is'. 'If I would visit the select city' is incorrect conditional form; corrected to 'If I visit such a city'. Also, 'so heavy rainfall' is corrected to 'experience heavy rainfall'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for grammatical accuracy.