Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
In Vietnam the weather really really depends on the region, but where I live in the north is quite diverse. We actually have Four Seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is usually hot and humid, we are wide. Winter surprisingly cold, especially with the wind. Personally I think autumn is the most pleasant because the weather is mild.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
To be honest, I prefer hot weather because I'm quite sensitive to the cold and tend to feel uncomfortable when it's chilly. Also, hot weather allows me to enjoy more outdoor activities such as cycling, jogging, or riding my bike in the park. These activities help me stay active and relax during the warmer months.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
Personally, I prefer dry weather because it's heavy rainfall often causes floods and traffic jams. In the big city like Hanoi, it can be quite unpleasant and inconvenient to go outside when it's raining heavily. Therefore, I find dry and cool weather much more comfortable and enjoyable for daily activities.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
I usually keep an eye on the weather forecast every morning before going out, especially during the rainy seasons because sudden showers are quite common in Vietnam. I also check it before I travel somewhere just to prepare the right clothes and umbrella.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
I find it as exciting to go to places where the weather is totally different. I enjoy experiencing new kinds of weather. For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because very rare in Vietnam. Also exploring tropical country with more stable weather is interesting. It makes traveling more exciting and.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
I find exciting to experiencing new kinds of weather. For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because very rare in Vietnam. Also exploring tropical countries with more stable weather. It's interesting, it makes traveling more exciting and gives me a chance to understand how people adapt to different.
평가
총점
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như "we are wide" không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như "really really". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: The weather in northern Vietnam is quite diverse because we have four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. Summer is usually hot and humid, while winter can be surprisingly cold, especially with the wind. Personally, I find autumn the most pleasant season because the weather is mild and comfortable.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 90.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một câu mở đầu ngắn gọn để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi ngay từ đầu và sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I prefer hot weather because I am sensitive to the cold and feel uncomfortable when it's chilly. Moreover, hot weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like cycling and jogging, which help me stay active and relaxed during the warmer months.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 85.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có lý do rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, câu đầu tiên có lỗi ngữ pháp "it's heavy rainfall often causes" nên sửa lại cho đúng. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.
예시: I prefer dry weather because heavy rainfall often causes floods and traffic jams. In a big city like Hanoi, it can be unpleasant and inconvenient to go outside when it rains heavily. Therefore, dry and cool weather is much more comfortable and enjoyable for daily activities.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 90.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một câu mở đầu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out, especially during the rainy season because sudden showers are common in Vietnam. Additionally, I check it before traveling to prepare appropriate clothes and an umbrella.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu mà lại nói về sở thích du lịch. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể liên quan đến biến đổi khí hậu.
예시: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events such as floods and droughts in my country. These changes affect agriculture and people's daily lives, making it harder to predict the weather and plan activities.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu cuối cùng để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine. For instance, I want to experience winter in Europe to see snow, which is very rare in Vietnam. Also, exploring tropical countries with stable weather sounds interesting because it allows me to learn how people adapt to different environments.
문법
× Summer is usually hot and humid, we are wide.
✓ Summer is usually hot and humid, we are wet.
The word 'wide' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'wet' to describe the weather condition. This is a vocabulary error related to word choice rather than grammar, but it affects the meaning of the sentence.
× Winter surprisingly cold, especially with the wind.
✓ Winter is surprisingly cold, especially with the wind.
The sentence lacks the verb 'is' which is necessary to form a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error where the verb is missing.
× In the big city like Hanoi, it can be quite unpleasant and inconvenient to go outside when it's raining heavily.
✓ In a big city like Hanoi, it can be quite unpleasant and inconvenient to go outside when it's raining heavily.
The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'big city' because it is a general statement, not referring to a specific city already known to the listener. The indefinite article 'a' is appropriate here.
× I find it as exciting to go to places where the weather is totally different.
✓ I find it exciting to go to places where the weather is totally different.
The phrase 'find it as exciting' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'find it exciting'. The word 'as' should be omitted to form a proper sentence.
× For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because very rare in Vietnam.
✓ For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because it is very rare in Vietnam.
The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and the verb 'is' in the clause 'because very rare in Vietnam'. This is a sentence structure error.
× Also exploring tropical country with more stable weather is interesting.
✓ Also, exploring tropical countries with more stable weather is interesting.
The sentence lacks a comma after 'Also' and 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match the context. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue.
× It makes traveling more exciting and.
✓ It makes traveling more exciting.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. This is a sentence structure error.
× I find exciting to experiencing new kinds of weather.
✓ I find it exciting to experience new kinds of weather.
The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' and uses the incorrect verb form 'experiencing' instead of the base form 'experience' after 'to'. This is a sentence structure and verb form error.
× For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because very rare in Vietnam.
✓ For example, I would love to visit Europe in the winter to see snow because it is very rare in Vietnam.
Same as previous similar sentence: missing subject 'it' and verb 'is' in the clause. Sentence structure error.
× Also exploring tropical countries with more stable weather.
✓ Also, exploring tropical countries with more stable weather is interesting.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'is interesting' completes the sentence. This is a sentence structure error.
× It's interesting, it makes traveling more exciting and gives me a chance to understand how people adapt to different.
✓ It's interesting; it makes traveling more exciting and gives me a chance to understand how people adapt to different climates.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'different' without specifying what is different. Adding 'climates' completes the thought. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate the two independent clauses. This is a sentence structure error.
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