Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

예시: I live in Guangdong, where the weather is usually hot and humid. We rarely need warm clothes and often wear T-shirts all year round. It's common to carry an umbrella because it can rain suddenly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it helps me sleep better. Also, when it's cold, my home feels cozier. I enjoy eating hot pot at home, which makes me feel relaxed.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化表达，注意时态和词序，避免重复和错误的比较结构。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I have lived in Guangdong for 20 years and am used to it. Also, wet weather helps keep my skin looking younger.

제안: 回答中语法错误明显，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句表达习惯，注意动词形式和句子完整性。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, especially before I go out, to work, or to play.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议明确说明气候变化的具体影响，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

예시: I think climate change has made the weather more extreme worldwide, including Guangdong. Winters are usually short and mild, often lasting less than a week.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: Yes, I visited Vienna in March this year. The sunlight there was quite strong, and the weather was dry, which was very different from my hometown.

× Well, as peoples know, I live in Guangdong and Guangdong's weather is wet and hot and usually we do not need many warm clothes.

✓ Well, as people know, I live in Guangdong and Guangdong's weather is wet and hot and usually we do not need many warm clothes.

“peoples”是复数形式，通常指不同民族或人民，而这里应使用“people”表示“人们”，是不可数名词。

× Usually we wear T-shirt all the year and we always take the umbrella outside in case it's suddenly raining.

✓ Usually we wear T-shirts all year and we always take an umbrella outside in case it suddenly rains.

“T-shirt”应使用复数形式“T-shirts”，因为指的是通常穿的多件T恤；“all the year”应为“all year”表示全年；“take the umbrella”应为“take an umbrella”，因为这里指的是一把伞；“it's suddenly raining”应改为“it suddenly rains”，更符合习惯表达。

× Well actually I prefer the cold weather because I think cold weather will makes me getting sleep more comfortable and I think when the weather gets cold the warmer my home feel and I will take some hot pot at home when I was feeling cold I think it's quite relaxing.

✓ Well actually I prefer the cold weather because I think cold weather will make me sleep more comfortably and I think when the weather gets cold, my home feels warmer and I will have some hot pot at home when I feel cold. I think it's quite relaxing.

“will makes”中“makes”应为原形“make”，因为情态动词后动词用原形；“getting sleep more comfortable”表达不正确，应改为“sleep more comfortably”；“the warmer my home feel”应为“my home feels warmer”，主谓一致；“when I was feeling cold”时态不对，应为一般现在时“when I feel cold”。

× Well actually I prefer the cold weather because I think cold weather will makes me getting sleep more comfortable and I think when the weather gets cold the warmer my home feel and I will take some hot pot at home when I was feeling cold I think it's quite relaxing.

✓ Well actually I prefer the cold weather because I think cold weather will make me sleep more comfortably and I think when the weather gets cold, my home feels warmer and I will have some hot pot at home when I feel cold. I think it's quite relaxing.

“getting sleep more comfortable”中“comfortable”应改为副词“comfortably”，修饰动词“sleep”；“take some hot pot”表达不自然，应改为“have some hot pot”。

× I will take some hot pot at home when I was feeling cold I think it's quite relaxing.

✓ I will have some hot pot at home when I feel cold. I think it's quite relaxing.

“when I was feeling cold”时态不对，前后时态不一致，应为一般现在时“when I feel cold”，表示习惯动作。

× I prefer the wet weather, not just because I live in Guangdong for 20 years.

✓ I prefer the wet weather, not just because I have lived in Guangdong for 20 years.

“live in Guangdong for 20 years”时态不对，应使用现在完成时“have lived”，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

× I already get used to it because the wet weather can keep my skin more looks more younger.

✓ I am already used to it because the wet weather can keep my skin looking younger.

“get used to”应为“be used to”表示习惯；“keep my skin more looks more younger”结构错误，应为“keep my skin looking younger”，使用动名词作宾语补足语；“more younger”比较级错误，应为“younger”。

× Yes, I have a good habit of checking the weather forecast especially when I go out or when I go to work or go to play I doing every day.

✓ Yes, I have a good habit of checking the weather forecast, especially when I go out, go to work, or go to play. I do it every day.

“I doing every day”缺少助动词，应为“I do it every day”；句子缺少逗号分隔，导致结构混乱。

× I think it's become more and more harder all over the world, especially at Guangdong.

✓ I think it's become harder and harder all over the world, especially in Guangdong.

“more and more harder”是错误的比较级表达，应为“harder and harder”；“at Guangdong”介词用错，应为“in Guangdong”。

× Usually at Guangdong winter we always wear the T-shirt and the weather will get cold.

✓ Usually in Guangdong in winter we always wear T-shirts and the weather gets cold.

“at Guangdong winter”应为“in Guangdong in winter”；“wear the T-shirt”应为“wear T-shirts”；“the weather will get cold”时态不合适，改为“一般现在时”表示习惯动作。

× I will take some hot pot at home when I was feeling cold I think it's quite relaxing.

✓ I will have some hot pot at home when I feel cold. I think it's quite relaxing.

“when I was feeling cold”时态不对，应为一般现在时“when I feel cold”，表示习惯动作。

× Yes, actually I visited Vienna in March this year and I feel the different kind in there.

✓ Yes, actually I visited Vienna in March this year and I felt a different kind of weather there.

“I feel the different kind in there”表达不完整且时态不对，应为过去时“felt”，并补充“of weather”使表达完整。

× They the sunlight is quite hot and the weather is quite dry.

✓ There, the sunlight is quite hot and the weather is quite dry.

“They the sunlight”应为“There, the sunlight”，指代地点。