Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. For example, instead of repeating 'usually' and 'wet', say 'The weather in Chengdu is often rainy, so I always carry an umbrella when I go out.'

예시: The weather in Chengdu is often rainy and humid, so I always carry an umbrella when I go outside.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Avoid awkward phrases like 'dress a tissue T-shirt'. Instead, say 'I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes like a T-shirt and go outside comfortably.'

예시: I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes like a T-shirt and go outside comfortably.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar by simplifying your sentences and avoiding repetition. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because where I live is often wet, which makes my clothes humid. I don't like rainy days.'

예시: I prefer dry weather because where I live is often wet, which makes my clothes humid. I don't like rainy days.

제안: Make your answer more complete and natural by adding linking words and clarifying your reason. For example, say 'Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go outside because it often rains where I live, so I need to dress appropriately.'

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go outside because it often rains where I live, so I need to dress appropriately.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and improve grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, say 'I think the climate has become hotter in recent years, possibly because the environment is getting worse.'

예시: I think the climate has become hotter in recent years, possibly because the environment is getting worse.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and combining sentences. For example, say 'Absolutely, I want to travel to Harbin, which has a cold and dry climate. It is very different from my city, so I think it would be interesting to visit.'

예시: Absolutely, I want to travel to Harbin, which has a cold and dry climate. It is very different from my city, so I think it would be interesting to visit.

× I always bring my umbrella to outside.

✓ I always bring my umbrella outside.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'outside' in this context. 'Outside' functions as an adverb here, so 'to' should be omitted.

× I don't want to dress too many clothes

✓ I don't want to wear too many clothes

The verb 'dress' is incorrectly used here; 'wear' is the correct verb when referring to putting on clothes. Also, 'too many clothes' is correct, but the verb choice was wrong.

× hot weather you can only dress a tissue T-shirt, T-shirt and then you can go outside.

✓ In hot weather, you can only wear a thin T-shirt and then go outside.

The phrase 'dress a tissue T-shirt' is incorrect; 'wear a thin T-shirt' is appropriate. Also, 'in hot weather' is the correct prepositional phrase to start the sentence.

× the clothes is often often humid

✓ the clothes are often humid

'Clothes' is a plural noun and requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I want to travel to Harbin, which is a very cold and dry city. It's very different. With the city I live now, I think it will be interesting.

✓ I want to travel to Harbin, which is a very cold and dry city. It's very different from the city I live in now. I think it will be interesting.

The phrase 'different with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'different from'. Also, 'the city I live now' should be 'the city I live in now' to be grammatically correct.