Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，"sunny"和"shiny"意思相近，建议用更丰富的词汇描述天气特点，并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。

예시: The weather where I live is mostly sunny with occasional rain showers. I particularly enjoy sunny days because they allow me to spend time outdoors with my friends and roommates.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确时态和句型，避免重复和不连贯的句子，同时丰富细节。

예시: I prefer cold weather, especially in winter, because I enjoy the snow. Snowy days are beautiful and give me a chance to try winter sports.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，"wild weather"用词不当，建议用更准确的词汇描述天气，并且句子结构应更连贯。

예시: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet conditions make me feel uncomfortable. Also, dry weather helps my clothes dry quickly after washing.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如"check in the weather forecast"和"I an ought to know"，建议使用正确表达并简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I get up so that I can plan my day accordingly.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够准确，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，明确表达观点并提供具体影响。

예시: Climate change has caused serious problems in recent years, such as extreme weather and rising temperatures. It affects our daily lives, so we must take care of the environment.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如"spell them"，建议使用正确表达并丰富细节，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I love traveling and would like to visit places with different climates. Experiencing various weather conditions makes my trips more interesting and memorable.

× Of course I like cold weather since it was winter.

✓ Of course I like cold weather since it is winter.

这里描述的是一般事实或习惯，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× That the weather will be cold.

✓ The weather will be cold.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应去掉多余的'That'使句子完整。

× I'm really a big fan of snowing days.

✓ I'm really a big fan of snowy days.

形容词'snowing'表示正在下雪的动作，作为形容词应使用'snowy'来描述天气状况。

× Definitely, I like dry weather cause the wild weather will make me feel upset while the dry weather I can be more energetic and the clothes can be dry soon after washing.

✓ Definitely, I like dry weather because wet weather makes me feel upset, while dry weather makes me more energetic and the clothes can dry soon after washing.

'cause'应改为正式的'because'；'wild weather'应为'wet weather'；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× Yes, I usually check in the weather forecast every day before I get up in the morning as I an ought to know the weather that I can plan my days.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day before I get up in the morning as I ought to know the weather so that I can plan my days.

'check in the weather forecast'应为'check the weather forecast'；'I an ought to'是错误表达，应为'I ought to'；句子连接词使用不当，改为'so that'更合适。

× The climate change in recent years is really a big trouble to human since the climate can be a really important part of our daily life, so we shouldn't be more care about it and protect our environment.

✓ Climate change in recent years is really a big problem for humans since climate is a really important part of our daily life, so we should care more about it and protect our environment.

'a big trouble'应为'a big problem'；'to human'应为'for humans'；'shouldn't be more care'表达错误，应为'should care more'。

× Yes, I'm really a big fan of traveling. I'd like to choose the different area that has different climates. It makes my traveling more colorful and I can spell them.

✓ Yes, I'm really a big fan of traveling. I'd like to choose different areas that have different climates. It makes my traveling more colorful and I can experience them.

'the different area'应为'different areas'，保持复数一致；'spell them'用词错误，应为'experience them'表示体验不同气候。