Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer-e kichu grammar error ache, ar 'too much hot' er bodole 'very hot' use kora bhalo. Apni answer-ta aro natural korte paren, ar sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte paren.

예시: I live in a place where the weather is very hot throughout the year, usually ranging from 28 to 35 degrees Celsius.

제안: Apnar answer-e kichu redundancy ache, jemon 'and all' er dorkar nei. Apni linking words use kore answer-ta aro clear korte paren. Sentence gulo ke aro concise rakhun.

예시: I prefer pleasant weather. However, if I had to choose, I would pick cold weather because it is more comfortable to stay both indoors and outdoors.

제안: Apnar answer-e repetition ache, ar sentence structure confused. Apni sentence gulo ke simple rakhun ar repetition avoid korun. Linking words use kore answer-ta logical banan.

예시: I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, my shoes and clothes get dirty easily, and it becomes difficult to go outside.

제안: Apni answer-e kichu repetition korechen, jemon 'checking the weather forecast' bar bar bola. Apni linking words use kore answer-ta aro fluent korte paren.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my mobile phone before going outside so that I can prepare myself accordingly.

제안: Apnar answer-e repetition ache, jemon 'less less frequently' ar 'for example' bar bar bola. Apni linking words use kore answer-ta aro clear rakhun ar repetition avoid korun.

예시: I think climate disasters such as floods and droughts were less frequent in the past, but recently their frequency and severity have increased significantly. For example, we now experience more intense storms and longer heat waves.

제안: Apnar answer-e kichu redundancy ache, jemon 'the snow, the snowy weather'. Apni sentence gulo ke aro concise rakhun ar linking words use korun.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience snow, as it never snows in my area and I have never enjoyed it before.

× I live in an area where the weather is too much hot throughout the year and it ranges between 28° to 35° throughout the year.

✓ I live in an area where the weather is too hot throughout the year and it ranges between 28° and 35° throughout the year.

The phrase 'too much hot' is incorrect; 'too hot' is the correct form because 'hot' is an adjective and 'too' modifies adjectives directly, not 'much hot'. Also, 'between 28° to 35°' should be 'between 28° and 35°' because 'between' pairs with 'and'. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'too hot' not 'too much hot'.

× I neither like cold weather nor hot weather, but however, if I had to choose one, I would choose cold weather because I feel it is more comfortable to stay both at home and at outside and all.

✓ I neither like cold weather nor hot weather; however, if I had to choose one, I would choose cold weather because I feel it is more comfortable to stay both at home and outside.

Using both 'but' and 'however' together is redundant; choose one. Also, 'at outside' is incorrect; 'outside' does not need 'at'. The phrase 'and all' is informal and unnecessary here. In English (Bangladesh), avoid using 'but however' together and say 'outside' without 'at'.

× I prefer dry weather because in the wet weather my shoes and clothes get dirty and get dirty very easily and it is quite difficult to move out in the hot weather in the wet weather, so I prefer.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather my shoes and clothes get dirty very easily, and it is quite difficult to go out in wet weather, so I prefer dry weather.

The sentence is repetitive and confusing. 'Get dirty' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Move out' is better expressed as 'go out'. Also, 'in the hot weather in the wet weather' is confusing and likely an error. In English (Bangladesh), avoid repeating phrases and use 'go out' instead of 'move out' when talking about leaving the house.

× Yes, I am in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but I usually check the weather forecast if I have to go outside so that I can prepare myself for the weather.

✓ Yes, I am in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but I usually check it if I have to go outside so that I can prepare myself for the weather.

Repeating 'the weather forecast' twice is redundant; using 'it' is better. No major preposition error here, but sentence can be more concise. In English (Bangladesh), use pronouns like 'it' to avoid repetition.

× I think that in the past, climate disasters like floods and droughts happened less less frequently, but in recent years their frequency and severity have increased significantly.

✓ I think that in the past, climate disasters like floods and droughts happened less frequently, but in recent years their frequency and severity have increased significantly.

The word 'less' is repeated twice by mistake. Correcting to a single 'less' is necessary. In English (Bangladesh), avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates because I want to experience the snow, the snowy weather because in my area it never snows and I never have got the experience to enjoy.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates because I want to experience snow, snowy weather, because in my area it never snows and I have never had the experience to enjoy it.

'I never have got' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have never had'. Also, 'the snow, the snowy weather' can be simplified to 'snow, snowy weather'. Adding 'it' at the end clarifies what is being enjoyed. In English (Bangladesh), use 'have never had' for past experiences and avoid unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns like 'snow'.