Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary related to weather and its effects.

예시: Where I live, the climate is tropical, so it is usually hot and humid throughout the year. Moreover, during the monsoon season, we experience heavy rainfall, which greatly benefits local agriculture and vegetation.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like 'scrumptious disease' and 'Are you going?'. Focus on giving a clear preference with reasons, using correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: I like both hot and cold weather, but I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layered and cozy clothes. Also, cold weather makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes. Avoid phrases like 'scrumptious disease'. Provide a clear preference and explain why, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: I like both dry and wet weather, but I prefer wet weather because I enjoy reading books and eating delicious food prepared by my mom while staying at home.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and is incomplete. Use correct tense and complete sentences. Explain clearly when and how often you check the weather forecast.

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before getting out of bed. It is part of my daily routine, and based on the forecast, I decide what to wear and whether to carry an umbrella.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'former' and 'demonic'. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to explain the effects of climate change clearly and specifically.

예시: In recent years, climate change has made farming more difficult. Farmers face problems because their crops are often damaged by unpredictable weather and extreme conditions.

제안: Your answer is confusing due to unclear phrases like 'Vodafone person' and grammatical errors. Express your interest in visiting different climates clearly and use correct sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I am fascinated by exploring new places and experiencing diverse weather conditions.

× I like both the weather, hot and cold, but I prefer cold weather because in cold weather I enjoy layered and cozy clothes, and I also enjoy scrumptious disease in cold weather.

✓ I like both kinds of weather, hot and cold, but I prefer cold weather because in cold weather I enjoy layered and cozy clothes, and I also enjoy scrumptious dishes in cold weather.

The phrase 'both the weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'both' directly. Instead, 'both kinds of weather' or 'both types of weather' is appropriate. Also, 'scrumptious disease' seems to be a typographical error; it should be 'scrumptious dishes' to make sense in context.

× I like the both weather but I prefer wet weather the most at that time.

✓ I like both kinds of weather but I prefer wet weather the most at that time.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'the both weather' is incorrect. 'Both kinds of weather' is the correct form to express liking two types of weather.

× I enjoy reading book and many scrumptious disease by sitting at home which is made by my mom.

✓ I enjoy reading books and many scrumptious dishes by sitting at home which are made by my mom.

'Reading book' should be pluralized to 'reading books' because it refers to multiple instances or general activity. 'Scrumptious disease' is incorrect and should be 'scrumptious dishes'. Also, 'which is made' should be 'which are made' to agree with the plural subject 'books and dishes'.

× Yes, I checked the weather before leaving the bed.

✓ Yes, I check the weather before leaving the bed.

The question asks about habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past tense 'checked'. Habitual actions are expressed in the present simple tense.

× It is the daily routine of my life and seeing the weather forecast I prefer to take.

✓ It is part of my daily routine, and after seeing the weather forecast, I decide what to take with me.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'I prefer to take' is incomplete and needs an object. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Well, in recent years the climate is changing that is harder for former.

✓ Well, in recent years the climate has been changing, which is harder for farmers.

The present perfect continuous tense 'has been changing' is appropriate to describe an ongoing change over recent years. 'Former' is a typo and should be 'farmers'. Also, 'that is harder' should be 'which is harder' to correctly connect the clauses.

× The crops of farmer is demonic, demolishing and they face difficulty.

✓ The crops of farmers are diminishing, being destroyed, and they face difficulties.

'Farmer' should be plural 'farmers' to match 'crops'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject 'crops'. 'Demonic' is incorrect; likely intended 'diminishing'. 'Demolishing' is better expressed as 'being destroyed'. 'Difficulty' should be plural 'difficulties' to match 'they'.

× Being a Vodafone person, I would like to visit more cities.

✓ Being a Vodafone customer, I would like to visit more cities.

'Vodafone person' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'Vodafone customer' or 'user'. Pronoun and noun usage should be precise to convey meaning clearly.

× I have fascinated exploring the world.

✓ I am fascinated by exploring the world.

'I have fascinated' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am fascinated by' to express interest or attraction. The verb 'fascinate' is used in passive form here, and the preposition 'by' is necessary.