Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和冗余，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: The weather where I live changes a lot. It is very hot in summer and extremely cold in winter. However, the climate is generally dry because it doesn't rain often.

제안: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I feel uncomfortable in the heat. When it's cold, I can wear warm clothes and feel more comfortable.

제안: 回答内容混乱且词汇使用错误，建议先理清思路，使用正确词汇表达喜好，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is usually warmer and has a special fresh smell that I like.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地说明习惯和频率，并解释原因。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every day because I don't like carrying an umbrella unless I know it will rain.

제안: 回答较简单且语法错误明显，建议使用更准确的表达并提供具体影响。

예시: I think the weather has become warmer in recent years due to air pollution, which causes hotter temperatures and more extreme weather events.

제안: 回答中存在时态和词汇错误，建议使用正确时态并清晰表达原因。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have been to Guangdong in southern China, which is warm and rainy, unlike my northern hometown, and I really enjoyed it.

× The weather in my lived place is always change it.

✓ The weather in my living place is always changing.

这里“lived place”应改为“living place”，因为表示居住的地方用现在分词作形容词；“is always change it”结构错误，应使用现在进行时“is always changing”，且不需要“it”。

× It was very hot in summer and very, very cold in winter.

✓ It is very hot in summer and very, very cold in winter.

描述常态天气时应使用一般现在时，而非过去时。

× I think I prefer cold advisor because I'm very afraid of heart, so how it will let me feel very uncomfortable but the cold.

✓ I think I prefer cold weather because I'm very afraid of heat, so hot weather makes me feel very uncomfortable but the cold doesn't.

“advisor”应为“weather”；“afraid of heart”应为“afraid of heat”；“how it will let me feel”表达不正确，改为“makes me feel”；“but the cold”后应补充完整句子。

× When the weather is cold, I can wear more clothes so that I will not feel very cold.

✓ When the weather is cold, I can wear more clothes so that I will not feel very cold.

此句无明显代词错误，保持原句。

× I prefer white visor because the drive is realized whether being more more hot and the white weather can bring a very bring a special smell to which I was very like.

✓ I prefer white weather because dry weather is usually hotter and white weather can bring a special smell that I like very much.

“white visor”应为“white weather”；“drive is realized whether being more more hot”表达混乱，应改为“dry weather is usually hotter”；“bring a very bring a special smell to which I was very like”语法错误，改为“bring a special smell that I like very much”。

× Yes, I always use my telephone to check in the weather forecast, maybe every day.

✓ Yes, I always use my telephone to check the weather forecast, maybe every day.

“check in the weather forecast”中“in”多余，应去掉。

× Yes, it is very always because I didn't like to usually bring an umbrella, but I'm afraid that the rain will and I don't have a.

✓ Yes, it is very often because I don't like to usually bring an umbrella, but I'm afraid it will rain and I won't have one.

“very always”顺序错误，应为“very often”；“didn't like to usually bring”时态和副词位置错误，应为“don't like to usually bring”；句子后半部分不完整，补充完整。

× I think now the weather become more warm because of the polluted of the atmosphere.

✓ I think now the weather has become warmer because of the pollution of the atmosphere.

“become”应使用现在完成时“has become”；“more warm”应为比较级“warmer”；“polluted of the atmosphere”应为“pollution of the atmosphere”。

× So the weather is very hot today.

✓ So the weather is very hot today.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× Yes, I visited a city in Guangdong because my live city is at the north of the China and Guangdong is at South of the China.

✓ Yes, I have visited a city in Guangdong because my city is in the north of China and Guangdong is in the south of China.

“visited”改为现在完成时“have visited”更合适；“my live city”应为“my city”；“at the north of the China”应为“in the north of China”；“at South of the China”应为“in the south of China”。

× So the Guangdong is very white and always rain and I like it.

✓ So Guangdong is very wet and it always rains, and I like it.

“white”应为“wet”描述气候；“always rain”应为“always rains”；“the Guangdong”前不加定冠词。