Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and provides specific temperature details, which is good. However, try to avoid redundancy such as repeating 'where I live' and improve sentence flow by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: The weather in Bangladesh is quite pleasant because it is neither too hot nor too cold. For instance, during summer, temperatures rarely exceed 35°C, while in winter, they usually stay above 10°C.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer cold weather over hot weather because in winter, wearing warm clothes like sweaters provides comfort. However, hot weather can be unbearable due to the heat and humidity.

제안: Your answer shows your opinion but has some grammatical mistakes and ends abruptly. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words properly to make your answer coherent.

예시: Although I don't like extreme dry or wet weather, I prefer dry weather because wet weather increases humidity, making it uncomfortable to stay outside.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide clear reasons with examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly because it is often inaccurate in my country. For example, last Sunday, the forecast said it wouldn't rain, but it rained heavily in the evening.

제안: Your answer covers important points but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'global warming' unnecessarily.

예시: Climate change has led to rising temperatures, causing the ozone layer to deplete and the polar ice caps to melt. Consequently, sea levels are rising, putting coastal countries at risk.

제안: Your answer is good and provides a specific example. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'I have been dreaming'.

예시: Since I live in Bangladesh with moderate weather, I would love to visit cities with extreme climates. For example, Finland interests me because during winter, the sun shines for only about four hours each day.

× In winter time we can just put on some heavy clothings or some sweater and it can give relief.

✓ In winter time we can just put on some heavy clothing or some sweaters and it can give relief.

The word 'clothing' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'clothings'. Also, 'sweater' should be pluralized to 'sweaters' to match the plural context when referring to some items. This correction ensures proper singular and plural usage.

× But in summertime or in hot weather, it gets unbearable and.

✓ But in summertime or in hot weather, it gets unbearable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction requiring an additional clause. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly and avoids sentence fragment errors.

× I although I don't like excessive dry or wet either, but if I have to choose I would prefer the dry weather more than the wet one because in wet weather the humidity spikes up and reaches the saturation point for example.

✓ Although I don't like excessive dry or wet weather either, if I have to choose, I would prefer dry weather more than wet weather because in wet weather the humidity spikes up and reaches the saturation point, for example.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions ('I although' and 'but') and awkward pronoun usage. Removing the redundant 'I' and 'but' and clarifying the pronouns improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I don't usually watch the weather report on regular basis because the weather report in our country are usually not that correct and fluctuates a lot.

✓ Well, I don't usually watch the weather report on a regular basis because the weather reports in our country are usually not that correct and fluctuate a lot.

'Weather report' should be pluralized to 'weather reports' when referring generally. Also, 'on regular basis' needs the article 'a' to become 'on a regular basis'. The verb 'are' agrees with plural 'weather reports', and 'fluctuates' should be 'fluctuate' to agree with plural subject.

× For example, last Sunday I watched weather report, it said there would be no raining and I.

✓ For example, last Sunday I watched the weather report; it said there would be no rain.

The sentence is a run-on and ends abruptly with 'and I'. Adding 'the' before 'weather report' and replacing 'raining' with the noun 'rain' corrects the sentence. Removing the incomplete clause 'and I' completes the thought properly.

× The global warming is causing the ozone layer to break up and poke holes in it.

✓ Global warming is causing the ozone layer to break up and poke holes in it.

'Global warming' is a general phenomenon and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' before 'global warming' is grammatically correct.

× Also, the northern ice is melting so it is causing a rise in sea level.

✓ Also, the northern ice is melting, so it is causing a rise in sea levels.

'Sea level' is commonly used in plural form 'sea levels' when referring to general rise affecting multiple areas. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence flow.

× So the countries in seashore are at danger.

✓ So the countries on the seashore are in danger.

The correct preposition for location adjacent to the sea is 'on the seashore', not 'in seashore'. Also, the phrase 'at danger' should be 'in danger' to express risk properly.

× As I live in Bangladesh, where the weather is neither too hot nor cold, I have always been dreaming of visiting different cities with extreme weathers.

✓ As I live in Bangladesh, where the weather is neither too hot nor too cold, I have always been dreaming of visiting different cities with extreme weather.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'weathers'. Also, adding 'too' before 'cold' balances the comparative structure.