Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“home class”和“so so so white”表达不清晰，建议使用准确的词汇描述天气，并避免重复和无意义的词语。

예시: The weather where I live is very hot during the summer, which makes me feel uncomfortable because it is humid and sticky.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“make me very sweet”应为“make me sweat”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确性，避免错误表达。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing, whereas hot weather makes me sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“feel like inside in the hot pot”不清楚，且句子未完整。建议使用完整句子并准确表达感受。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable, almost like being inside a hot pot.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议完整回答问题，说明具体时间和频率，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going to work to decide what to wear.

제안: 回答简短且语法不准确，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议扩展回答，使用正确的时态和连接词，具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: In recent years, I think the weather has become hotter and more unpredictable, which affects people's daily lives and the environment.

제안: 回答中存在用词错误，如“homeless”用错，且表达不流畅。建议使用正确词汇描述气候差异，并避免口语填充词。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Shenyang because it has a dry climate, which is very different from the humid weather in my hometown.

× My home class, Wiser, is very hot in the summer and it's not comfortable for me.

✓ My hometown, Wiser, is very hot in the summer and it's not comfortable for me.

这里的 'home class' 应该是 'hometown'，表示家乡。'class' 是班级，和语境不符。

× It's so so so white and not dry.

✓ It's so so so wet and not dry.

这里用 'white' 形容天气不合适，应该是 'wet'（潮湿）来描述天气潮湿的状态。

× I don't like hot weather because it like a hot pot and make me very sweet.

✓ I don't like hot weather because it is like a hot pot and makes me very sweaty.

主语是第三人称单数 'it'，谓语动词应加 -s，'like' 应改为 'is like'，'make' 应改为 'makes'。另外，'sweet' 应为 'sweaty'，表示出汗。

× I really dislike the feel like inside in the hot pot.

✓ I really dislike the feeling of being inside a hot pot.

'feel like inside in' 结构不正确，应改为 'feeling of being inside'，表达更自然。

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the forecast weather.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast.

'forecast weather' 词序错误，正确表达是 'weather forecast'。

× When I go to work every morning, I like to check I need to confirm if I need.

✓ When I go to work every morning, I like to check if I need to bring an umbrella.

原句结构混乱，缺少完整表达，需补充完整句子使意思明确。

× I think in the recent years the weather became more and more hot and it changes. So significantly.

✓ I think in recent years the weather has become hotter and it has changed significantly.

描述最近几年发生的变化，应使用现在完成时，'became' 改为 'has become'，'changes' 改为 'has changed'。

× Yes, I'd like to visit other cities. Uh, for example, I like to visit Shenyang because it has a dry weather.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit other cities. Uh, for example, I like to visit Shenyang because it has dry weather.

'a dry weather' 中 'weather' 是不可数名词，不需要冠词 'a'。

× It's very different with my hometown because my hometown is very homeless.

✓ It's very different from my hometown because my hometown is very humid.

'different with' 应为 'different from'，'homeless' 意为无家可归，与语境不符，应为 'humid'（潮湿）。