Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，使用更准确的词汇描述气候，并且避免冗余。可以先直接回答气候类型，然后具体描述季节特点，最后表达个人感受。

예시: The weather in my city is subtropical. Summers are usually very hot, while winters can be quite cold. Honestly, I don't enjoy such extreme temperatures because they can be uncomfortable.

제안: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，应直接表达偏好，使用连接词使句子流畅，并具体说明喜欢的季节和原因。

예시: I definitely don't like extreme weather because it annoys me and makes me frustrated. I prefer mild weather, such as in autumn or spring, because it feels comfortable and pleasant.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议直接表达偏好并说明原因，使用连词连接观点和细节。

예시: If I have to choose, I prefer wet weather. Rainy days and humid air make me feel refreshed and relaxed.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，应直接回答习惯和频率，说明查看天气预报的具体用途，句子要完整。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my phone every morning. It helps me decide what to wear for the day.

제안: 回答表达不清且语法错误多，应先明确气候变化的影响，再具体说明如冰川融化、海平面上升和自然灾害，使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Climate change has caused significant effects recently. For example, ice is melting, which leads to rising sea levels. This also results in more natural disasters that are very harmful to the environment.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议直接表达愿望，说明想去的城市及其气候特点，并解释原因，避免不确定的表达。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Japan, which often has cold weather. I think the cooler climate there would be more comfortable compared to my hot hometown.

× Well the weather in my cities is a sub tropical climate what I don't know how to describe.

✓ Well, the weather in my city is a subtropical climate that I don't know how to describe.

这里的cities应为city，因为说的是自己所在的一个城市。sub tropical应合并为subtropical，且关系代词用that更合适。

× And to be honest I don't like this weather and I think sometimes it's really made my temperature.

✓ And to be honest, I don't like this weather and I think sometimes it really affects my temperature.

made my temperature用法不正确，应使用affects my temperature，表示影响体温。

× We are absolutely not and I think this extreme weather will really annoying and will make me very frustrating and I prefer the mild weather like the in autumn or even or in spring and this can give me a sense of.

✓ I absolutely do not, and I think this extreme weather is really annoying and makes me very frustrated. I prefer mild weather like in autumn or even in spring, which can give me a sense of comfort.

We用错，应为I。will really annoying应改为is really annoying，will make me very frustrating应改为makes me very frustrated。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Well if I have to say choose one I might to choose the wet weather and I prefer rainy days and whenever the the air is humid and it will made me in a good stay and I will feel more.

✓ Well, if I have to choose one, I might choose wet weather. I prefer rainy days when the air is humid because it makes me feel good and I feel more comfortable.

might to choose错误，正确用法是might choose。it will made应为it makes。句子表达不清，需调整。

× When and how often Yeah, I I like to check in my weather forecast on my phone and I will to say the temperature of recently and I think it can be a very useful for me to choose what I will wear of these days and I will also to.

✓ When and how often? Yeah, I like to check the weather forecast on my phone, and I will say the recent temperature. I think it is very useful for me to choose what to wear these days.

check in my weather forecast错误，应为check the weather forecast。will to say错误，应为will say。of these days应为these days。句子不完整，需简化。

× What climate change recent opposed a strides on our climate and our creatures like the ice began to melt which bring the sea horizon to rise and this also bring a lot of natural disaster which pose a very harmful.

✓ Recent climate change has caused great changes to our climate and creatures, like the ice beginning to melt, which brings the sea level to rise. This also causes many natural disasters which are very harmful.

句子结构混乱，时态和主谓不一致。opposed a strides错误，应为has caused great changes。bring应为brings。natural disaster应为natural disasters。pose a very harmful不完整，应为are very harmful。

× Well, I really want to visit the other cities like in Japan is climate is often cold. I'm not sure but I listen to someone say that before and I think the weather there is maybe a bit comfortable for the way I live because I'm my hometown is always hot and.

✓ Well, I really want to visit other cities like those in Japan where the climate is often cold. I'm not sure, but I heard someone say that before, and I think the weather there might be a bit more comfortable for me because my hometown is always hot.

the other cities应为other cities。is climate is错误，应为where the climate is。listen to someone say应为heard someone say。maybe a bit comfortable应为might be a bit more comfortable。I'm my hometown错误，应为because my hometown。